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08 February 2014 @ 12:08 am
Practicing Lesbians [Part Three]  

Title: Practicing Lesbians [3/4]

Pairing(s): YoonSic

Rating/Genre: Light R, Sexy Fluffasaurus Rex

Disclaimer: I don't own Soshi. I don't own anyone, in fact. All Fiction.

Chap. Summary: First date shenanigans!

Author's Notes: Who’s shocked that I’d have a crush on Sooyoung’s character? Nobody? Okay, then. Thanks to everybody enjoying this fic!! Anons are welcome, btw. :3



A chilly Friday night. Classes could finally take the back burner. A brightly marked ‘98’ put her German project to bed (Oh ja!!). No time-consuming assignments infesting her email. The perfect evening for Yoona to flop onto a bed, lace her fingers with Jessica’s, and badmouth professors into the wee hours.

No, life didn’t work that easily.

Tonight was the night. The night of their big date. A whopping three weeks after she proposed the idea.

Yoona = petrified.

To make matters worse, she had to deal with this debilitating sense of panic alone. As much as Jo Kwon was dying to help her out, he had an emergency of his own: boyfriend issues. He pledged to live vicariously through her happy times while he sat in his man’s apartment, discussing feelings.

She and Jessica decided to tell only one friend each--so, Jessica’s choice was Sunny, naturally. Yoona never witnessed a straight woman so head-over-ass excited about two girls dating. In her final class of the afternoon, she received a text via Lee Sunkyu, informing her of Jessica’s detainment. Apparently, Sunny confused “first date” with “marriage” and refused for them to see each other until they met at the gallery.

It’d taken Yoona many days and tons of arguing with Jo Jo about the date itself--hence the delay. Jo preferred the traditional “dinner and a movie” scenario to a groaning, disagreeable Yoona. She and Jessica were friends already--wouldn’t it be weird to do the whole cliché romantic plan? Yoona argued for something crazy and destined for hilarious stories. Jo retorted that they’d get hungry. Eventually, they settled on a live show at a hip exhibit across the city followed by a spontaneous meal at a nearby eatery.

Yoona flung her twelfth shirt over her back into the dresser drawer. A special night and she couldn’t find a single wearable top--too baggy, too green, too frilly, too short, too long, too itchy, too plain, too shiny, too dull, too grandma, too childish, too plaid. Yoona stroked her chin, questioning what she normally did when she went low on clothes.

Oh. Right. She’d steal something from Jessica’s collection.

Seemed a little tacky to wear her girlfriend’s clothes on such a special occasion. She settled on the frilly floral-print one. At least it was low-cut.

No worries went into her pants selection. Jessica’s favorite “supermodel” jeans hugged her hips and made the dressing process much more tolerable.

She clipped on a pair of cute ankle boots and scrutinized her choices in the full-length mirror. It’d become impossible to think of this as simply “hanging out with a friend.” She wanted to impress Jessica without coming off tryhard. Putting this to mind, she ruffled her hair, undoing the hour-and-a-half it took to get perfectly in place.

Yoona gingerly spritzed her neck with perfume that she realized belonged to Jessica, loaded up the first purse she touched, and darted out the dorm.



The woman cursed to herself as the cab pulled up, giving her a chance to spot Jessica there, already waiting. She swiped her card--accidentally paying a bigger tip than she wanted--and bolted to the marble steps.

“Jessica, hi! I--” Yoona’s words stuck in her throat as she got a better look at her date.

Shiny, voluminous dark hair curled at the ends. Impeccable makeup. A peacoat covered what she could only expect was a dress based on the length of lovely exposed legs shown underneath.

“You’re late,” Jessica stated, appraising her with an amused grin. “Am I overdressed?”

“No, you’re not!” Yoona squeaked louder than necessary. “Amazing would be an understatement. I feel like an ass.”

“Don’t. You’re wearing the jeans I like. Sexy.”

Yoona didn’t know what to do with her arms, so she crossed them. “You-you, too. You’re sexy.”

“Aren’t you cold?”

She patted at her upper half. Her purse was intact, but...the cab peeled off, unknowingly carrying her jacket. “Damnit.”

“Was there anything important in your pockets?”

“No, I...shit.” Embarrassment hurt way more than some chinsy coat her aunt gifted her on Christmas.

Jessica giggled, taking her hand. “Yoona, calm yourself. I’ll keep you warm tonight, kay?”

Her suggestive wink didn’t go unnoticed. Yoona laughed to herself and followed her to the double doors.


Choi Sooyoung, a sculpting major from her art history class, never clarified exactly what was in store for the presentation that night. Only, “It’s the making of a beautiful installation--titled, Eataly.” Yoona should have known not to trust someone who mumbled to herself in broken Swahili and chewed on her hoody strings.

Yoona and Jessica sat in the third row of a mass circle of chairs, biting back obnoxious pangs of laughter as Sooyoung and her cohort of artists flung themselves into vats of paint and melted cheese, chanting “I am artisan pizza, artisan pizza am I.” Tartufata sauce flung from prancing team members’ overalls, sharply splattering the shrieking first row.

“Certainly not hungry for Italian after this,” Jessica remarked lowly into Yoona’s ear, tickling her skin.

“Craving anything in particular?”

“Ramen?”

“You always want ramen.”

“Ramen’s always good.”

“No argument here.”

When Sooyoung’s team moved onto the dough-rolling segment, Jessica deemed the environment safe enough to take off her coat. Thank goodness for the earsplitting cry of a stubby guy sporting a mohawk (“Eat me, da Vinci! Eat my soul!") or she would have observed Yoona’s jaw drop to the floor.

She’d never seen that dress. Sinfully tight up top, tapering into a graceful chiffon pleat. Black and intense as Yoona’s pupils.

“God, now they’re baking themselves,” Jessica commented, unaware of her girlfriend’s ovarian meltdown. It gave Yoona a chance to tear her eyes away--one, two, six, twelve times. Perhaps Jessica installed eye magnets into her cleavage.

Yoona folded her program into a fat square, trying her hardest to feign interest in the Parmesan finale. Light fingertips found their way into her hand. One of them absently stroked the V of her pointer and middle finger. She peeked over to her girlfriend who resumed watching the show. Whether the action meant to be comforting or tantalizing, it riled Yoona’s insides all the same.

Soon after, they stood with the rest of the crowd to applaud. Though Sooyoung’s troupe performance elicited more wtf’s than a chatroom, the amount of unbridled merriment painting Jessica’s features reassured her of a successful date.

“Should I tell Sooyoung congratulations?” Yoona asked, wary of her distance to tempting pink lips.

Jessica leaned forward, her wispy voice struggling against chatter and chair-squeaking. “If she can hear you through the pesto in her ears.”

Their heels clicked over to the long lanky girl sprawled on a 10-foot wide ceramic plate, face stoic as a statue. Jessica squeezed at her arm, composing herself. Yoona over-excitedly delivered a thought-out spiel. Sooyoung, dedicated to the setting, refused to speak--though she granted a subtle smirk of gratitude.

To commemorate “one of the best laughs of her life,” Jessica thumbed at her iPhone’s camera app. Her smile grew so big that her eyes closed while Yoona’s toothy grin spread inhumanly wide. One girl’s elated expression thanks to the saucy mess of an installation in the background; the other’s because they took their very first couple photo.
...

Jessica slid Yoona’s left hand into her coat pocket once they stepped outside. “Find me delicious ramen.”

She nodded obediently, appreciating the other hand rubbing her arm while she checked her phone for restaurant ratings. A 4.5-star place was a half block away, so she tugged them into that direction.

“Reviews say they have the best ramen in Korea.”

“If it’s not, I’m blaming you.”

Yoona laughed through her nose, noting the puffs of frozen air swirl forward. Leaving behind a coat seemed stupid before; now she couldn’t be more thankful for an acceptable excuse to hold Jessica close.



The glass spoon clinked into Yoona’s empty bowl as she sat back with a sigh. “Damn, that was so good.”

“Was it the best?” Jessica questioned, only halfway finished with her meal. She had always been a slow eater.

“I’d put it in the top three.”

“That’s not the best ever. I blame you.”

Yoona smirked and stole a pot sticker from Jessica’s plate. “What would you rate it?”

“Doesn’t matter. I’m blaming you right now.” She sipped at her ramen, eyes teasing.

“Oh yeah? Is discipline in order?”

“Maybe.”

“You wouldn’t dare.”

“Try me.”

“I dare you to spank me.”

When Jessica sputtered into her spoonful, Yoona’s face caught a fiery blush. She mouthed the crunchy dumpling and chewed slowly. Silence appeared to diffuse the atmosphere. That is, until Jessica uttered a clear, “If you wish,” giving eye contact that would break Yoona all over again.



The temperature dropped acutely by the time they stepped outside.

“Yoona,” Jessica cooed, guiding her into a hug. “It’s freezing. You’re going to get sick.”

“No, I won’t,” Yoona replied shakily, regretting her lack of sleeves. “Let’s take a walk.”

Her proposition felt crazy in every sense of the word, but she didn’t want the date to end. The night had been unpredictable, hilarious, flirty...it shouldn’t come to a close due to a few degrees here and there.

“Where to?”

“There’s a neighborhood not too far from here. It’d be fun to poke around.”

“Yoona…” Jessica held onto her pale cheeks, searching her eyes. “For real?”

“Yeah. C’mon.”

The residential area looked like the ones from catalogues with evergreen trees, picket fences, and pastel two-to-three story houses separated by sizeable yards. Through ignoring cringeworthy gusts, she squeezed Jessica’s pocketed hand.

“What made you want to walk through here?” she asked, voice intrigued.

Yoona eyed a golden retriever zip into a huge white-paneled house lit with warm, amber windows. She’d never seen a doggy door in real life--seemed like a concept reserved only for television. "One day, I’ll afford my own picture-perfect house. Like one of these."

“Oh?”

“Did you have a house like this? Back in California?”

Jessica nodded against her shoulder, placing a kiss onto her neck. “Mmhm. Overlooking the Pacific.”

“That sounds nice. I always wanted to live like this.”

“I didn’t know that about you.”

Yoona tugged at her ear, smiling wistfully. “Now you know.”

“Let’s do it.”

She chuckled, ready for the punchline to the joke. Rather than laughter, Jessica stopped in her tracks, anchoring Yoona to the sidewalk. “Wha--?”

“Let’s do it.” Jessica gestured to a quaint blue two-story house. Swinging on a post was a bright red ‘MODEL HOME’ banner under a real estate number. “Says it’s open until 10:30pm.”

“I think it’s empty. Are we allowed inside without a broker?”

“Who cares? It’s almost ten, so we’d better hurry.”

The model home was fully furnished, yet too spotless to be regularly inhabited. Yoona closed the glass-paned door behind her, taking in the new smell. The other girl flicked on a few lights.

“Want to play house?” Jessica giggled, securing her jacket onto a coat rack.

Yoona grinned at her enthusiasm. “What are we, twelve?”

“No. You’re Im Yoona, the homeowner. This is your brand new house where you live with...your….husband?”

Wife,” she corrected, spotting a wink.

“How modern of you.” Jessica shot a coy glance to the hardwood floor, smirking. “What’s her name?”

Her chest clenched for the first time that night. Yoona straightened her throat daintily, mustering her sweetest voice. “Im Jessica.”

“Great!” Jessica blurted, cheeks rosy. “You’ll be homeowner Im Yoona and I’ll play your beautiful wife, Im Jessica.”

“Who said she was beautiful?”

“With a name like that, she has to be.”

For the next twenty minutes, they toured the interior--

pointing out desired changes (“I’d knock that wall down for a rec room.” “Our master bathroom needs more counter space.”),
décor ideas (“This room would look amazing all-pink” “Can we agree on peach?”),
irresponsible opinions ("A full bar belongs in our bedroom.” “Those smoke detectors are an eyesore.”),
and skirted uncomfortable topics (“Why’s this room so small?” “I think it’s for a child.” “Oh.”).

They ended up in the kitchen, gulping down lemonade. Refreshments for actual buyers.

“See, wasn’t that fun?” Jessica said into her cup.

Yoona smiled wholeheartedly, watching her girlfriend drink. “I haven’t had fun like that since grade school.”

“You’re welcome.”

Jessica clacked across the linoleum tile to pluck Yoona’s crushed cup from her hand. She threw their trash away and reassembled the paltry refrigerator contents.

The real-life vision of Jessica comfortably moving around the room, nosying in untouched cabinets, brought a single number to Yoona’s mind: Six.

It baffled her that she initially freaked over the likes of number four when “Love?” had been scratched onto the paper like nothing. She really could see herself years from now, living in a fine neighborhood. Watching Jessica live out her “sitcom housewife fantasy” or “fancy French museum patron" or anything else she wanted, truly. As long as she had Jessica at her side.

“Oh god,” she gasped, coming to the realization.

She loved her. She loved Jessica.

Jessica looked over her shoulder. Her eyebrows knit with concern. “Yoona, you okay?”

Yoona shook her head, forcing out a giggle. “It’s nothing.”

“Whatever you say, honey,” Jessica purred in an overly giddy voice.

She burst out laughing, adding in, “Okay, sweetheart.

“Yes, cupcake.”

“Cutiebuns.”

“Dreamboat.”

“Shnooky-face.”

“Sweetpea.”

“Darling.”

“Angel.”

Gummibärchen.

Ma bichette.

Desire/Intuition/Gravitational pull managed to float Yoona into Jessica’s arms, laying open-mouth kisses to her waiting lips. This date didn’t show her how to find a way into Jessica’s pants; it showed a way into her heart and the cheesiness pained her cloudy head. Their kisses were even hungrier than the welcome back make out. Because this time--on Yoona’s end at the very least--more than lust fueled the passion.

She’d fallen in love with Jessica. And it felt right.

Jessica’s touches no longer burned. They melted. Fingers in Yoona’s hair melted onto her skull, their lips blended together, and the other hand sneaking beneath her frilled shirt could stick there for the rest of her life for all she cared. Comfortable at last to be one.

“Now?” the shorter girl breathed into her lips.

Yoona nodded, flinching only slightly at the fidgety hands materializing at her zipper. Maybe their lips weren’t permanently fixed together since Yoona threw her head back in a mewl as Jessica slid her hand into the front of her pants.

“Mm. So warm.”

“God, Jessica. Please--”

Cautious fingertips pressed more firmly. Yoona swore that her heart stopped at the first head-on jab at her sweet spot. Jessica’s tongue found Yoona’s earlobe and she sucked brazenly, moaning as strokes along the damp material grew frenetic.

Yoona needed something, anything to hold. Her arms circled Jessica’s tiny waist. They made a detour to hook onto her shoulders. Restless and apparently searching for a specific destination, Yoona contemplated tying her limbs into a knot before they snaked between their bodies.

Jessica broke the lip service to her ear. “Yes, touch me there.”

Yoona’s hands felt like they belonged to someone else while they kneaded perky breasts through the pliable fabric. A surreal, yet highly satisfying experience. Jessica resumed her limber fingers’ mission, poking and scratching and pinching all the right places through silk until Yoona practically screamed for the torment to end.

Then, she felt it. A slender digit sliding in, causing her to suck in an unsteady breath just as the front door sounded.

They silenced, exchanging lust-laden, half-confused glances.

Another knock and Jessica slipped out her hand, fleeing from the kitchen light. Remembering their stuff, Yoona snatched the purses and peacoat from the coat rack and hissed to use the patio door. They ran giggling from the backyard. All the way back to the commercial city streets.

“Can you imagine if we were caught?” Jessica breathlessly cackled, bringing Yoona in to wrap her arms into her jacket.

“I’m pretty sure girls getting it on would make them sell a house sooner.”

Jessica shoved her tongue past her lips for a deep kiss, paying no mind to the startled passerbys in the streets. She spoke hotly into her mouth. “It’ll always be our place.”

Yoona shivered--not from the wind--and kissed her back. “We can find something better. One day.”

Her girlfriend’s eyes fluttered open, a curious smile upon her lips. “Yes. One day.”

Without breaking her gaze, Yoona held a long arm to the air, hailing a yellow cab within seconds. Jessica puckered her lips, impressed.

“Enjoy your night?” she asked, as if she didn’t know the answer.

Jessica grinned, pressing on another kiss after she dipped into the car. “The best.”

“Five stars?”

“All the stars, boo.”

“Cuddle bunny.”

“My artisan pizza.”

“Oh, geez. No. Too soon.” Yoona scoffed before she recited their university location to the cabbie.

Though, she couldn’t help but ponder which of the pet names they’d eventually choose.

[Final Part:]A/N: Fluff and sexytimes (Part Four) will be posted on Valentine’s Day. <3
 
 
Current Mood: optimisticoptimistic
Current Music: SNSD- Say Yes
 
 
 
wenkeywenkey on February 8th, 2014 06:03 am (UTC)
I swear... you must be a genius. You never fail to make me laugh, swoon, or both. Seriously, Eataly? I would pay very good money to see this just to laugh my ass off the whole time while I just think "wtf." But seriously everything you write is so perfect.

Can't wait for the last update! I figured the last part would have the ~sexy times~ but I was shocked to see a bit of it in here. Was like "hot damn, getting it earlier than expected" but of course they have to be interrupted...

SO MANY GOOD THINGS COMING OUT NEXT WEEK. Ugh SM the Ballad (has 3 of my biases in it now), BTS, some more albums I'm interested in, and to wrap up the week... part 4! Can't wait. :D
checkinyourbra: yoona02checkinyourbra on February 9th, 2014 07:53 pm (UTC)
A...a genius?!!? Omg bb you're so sweet. *blushes*

Laughing and swooning is what this multishot is all about! Glad I'm doing my job well. ^^ Omg I'd nab tickets to Eataly in a second. No joke.

Surpriseeeee~~~ A little somethin' somethin' for the readers before the 14th. ;D

OMGGGG i'm so flattered that I'm included in the "good things" list. Curious~~ Who are your biases in the SM the Ballad lineup?

THANKS FOR READING, BB. ♥♥
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scratch'd note5scratchdnote5 on February 8th, 2014 06:50 am (UTC)
LA!!!! Brb. (:
checkinyourbra: jessica03checkinyourbra on February 9th, 2014 07:45 pm (UTC)
Note!! It's you~~

:DDD
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I la- la- la- love youregreted on February 8th, 2014 08:34 am (UTC)
I love you

Proper comment to follow.
checkinyourbra: yoonsic01checkinyourbra on February 9th, 2014 07:46 pm (UTC)
I love you, too, bb. ^^

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yuukistar22yuukistar22 on February 8th, 2014 09:47 am (UTC)
SPOT - brought to you by *theme music* Rainbows and Unicorns Inc.

Edit: So Sooyoung is some crey art freakazoid? Love it!

ASDFGHJKL THE YOONSIC DYNAMIC HERE IS SO LOVEABLE. I SWEAR DOWN YOU'RE SO CLOSE TO MAKING ME SHIP THEM OMG...but not close enough eyyyy ;) My heart stays with SunSic <3

Pet names are always a little cringeworthy but when YoonSic use them I can deal, it's cute.

Can I just say YOU ARE SUCH A GOD DAMN TEASE I SWEAR . Everything was so hot and awesome and why did the goodness have to stahp?! Super anticipating the next part, the only thing I'm looking forward to on crappy Valentine's Day ;D

Thanks for dis! You're awesomeness is ever present~




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checkinyourbra: yoonsic01checkinyourbra on February 9th, 2014 08:16 pm (UTC)
ONLY THE GAYEST FROM *theme tune* SPOT at a gay bar near you!!

Sooyoung the crey art freakazoid is PERFECT. Ughhhh such a crush on her character.

DYNAMIC LOVE!?! THANK YOU, LOVE. WHaaaaaaaaaattt?? I though you were a fleet-shipper like me? :((( I am disappoint, fellow perv. YoonSic may be the OTP, but I'll never shy from a good SeoSic, SunSic, TaengSic, or JeTi. Actually, I enjoy any Jessica ship if it's written well~

tsk tsk.

Pet names are meant to be cringeworthy to those outside the relationship....BUT YAY. Overly cute. ^^

ANOTHER PERSON CALLING ME A TEASE FOR MY GENEROUS BESTOWING OF A MAKEOUT SESH. GAWSH. Ahhhhh are you not a V-Day fan, either? Ah well, enjoy the smut when it comes (hehehe).

*You're* awesome, too, bb!! I hope we can chitty chat some time soon. ♥♥
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the_bluebeariesthe_bluebearies on February 8th, 2014 01:38 pm (UTC)
wahhahahhahhahah

i like the 'irresponsible opinions' bit.
i enjoyed reading this chapter so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(disclaimer: i am still a taeny shipper, xD)
checkinyourbra: taenycheckinyourbra on February 9th, 2014 07:55 pm (UTC)
hahahah your cray cray laughter. I missed that. :')

Yaaaayyy. That whole "house tour" part was a treat to write. I could have went on for pages, but that'd be ridiculous. I LOVE ALL THOSE EXCLAMATION POINTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

((Of course you are. You're one of my favorite Locksmiths, remember? ^^))

Thanks for commenting, TaeNy lover :DD
whyyyyyyyparachuterawr on February 8th, 2014 11:19 pm (UTC)
"This date didn’t show her how to find a way into Jessica’s pants; it showed a way into her heart and the cheesiness pained her cloudy head." - this is funny yet so sweet at the same timeeee.

Did I tell you how loud I squealed when I saw this chapter? But you must have heard me anyway cuz it was THAT loud.

Also, how dare you. Teasing us with that quick intense make out scene. Like, ughh *shoves cookies into my mouth*

FOR ONCE I CANT WAIT FOR VALENTINES <3
checkinyourbra: jessica03checkinyourbra on February 9th, 2014 08:00 pm (UTC)
When I typed that line, I side-eyed myself and had a little debate on whether to keep it. Glad I did just because it put a smile to your face. :)

I KNEW that was you!!! Your voice is beautiful~~

H-how dare I?!?! I was helping *y'all* out. :P...........are you gonna share those cookies?

Hahaha if I provide a reason to make V-day more appealing, I've done my job. Thanks, cutie. ^^
jdthehost909 on February 9th, 2014 01:53 am (UTC)
Hahahahaha oh God, Sooyoung's art showcase thingy... if there's something I will never, ever understand, it's art. Then again, I think it's something I would pay to see... so hey, maybe artists know what works after all.

And of course, the date was very cute. Probably the first time I've heard of someone going on a date in a house for sale, real life or fiction (usually it comes after the marriage), but really sweet. :D
checkinyourbra: yoona02checkinyourbra on February 9th, 2014 08:06 pm (UTC)
Hahahah I'm an ~artist~ myself and even I haven't stumbled upon a show like Eataly yet...but I'm DYING to do so. Taking a fun class, in Modern Art history, especially, can help. I used to be "eh" about it, now I can't get enough. :DDD

Yeah, I've never heard of a house date either, but I'd totes go on one. :3

Thanks for commenting, love~
dashelots: jiadashelots on February 10th, 2014 12:24 pm (UTC)
okay, so it's early in the morning and this amazingness is causing me to laugh much louder than is appropriate.

check, you know my love for sunny and oh my god what have you done characterising her in such a way, i love it so much. her being head over ass about yoonsic and not letting them see each other before the date. i. am. crying.

second, please, please, please, tell me that sooyoung's eataly is inspired by real life because holy shit. your sooyoung's are the best.

But argh i still love the dynamic between yoona and jessica and how that was kind of accidentally turned on it's head at the ramen place with yoona's blurted comment and jessica's choking on noodles. and asdfgghjkl the fluff was so fluffy and ~yoona loves jessica and it feels right~ and on valentines day you're gonna post the valensmut and all i good in the world and i can't wait. :)))))) oh and i'm still all AHHHH about the bits of german that make their way in to this hahahaa.

ty bb, bring on the fluff and the smut. time to get onto the sunsic valensmut now omgg <333

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checkinyourbra: yoonsic01checkinyourbra on February 14th, 2014 06:25 am (UTC)
BB!!!!!!!!!!! I finished the final part. Now, I can answer these delicious comments without the guilt xDDD

Reading mah stuff in the morning?! Idk why, but that makes me so happy.

Whenever I write a Sunny character, you manage to pop into mind every now and then. I ASSOCIATE YOU WITH LEE SUNKYU. Such a lucky one <3 I'd love to see irl Sunny that excited over lesbians...hehehe

Omg no Eataly was completely fabricated my mind. I WISH it was real.....omg am I in the wrong art field? DD: SOOYOUNG'S CHARACTER <333

Hahaha the spanking comment caught our confident Jessica off guard, right? That's how these ladies work~~ GAHHHH so much fluff. I hope you didn't squee puke too hard. Thanks again for the German help, bb. *hugs*

VALENSMUT AHOY!! SO READY FOR WHATEVER YOU PUT OUT.

Thanksssss~~
boxxsaltzboxxsaltz on February 10th, 2014 05:58 pm (UTC)
As promised, I have caught up! Holy crap, Checks. I told you you never disappoint. This fic is way too good - is that even possible? I'm in love with Jessica's character. How bold she is and all. And then there's Yoona with her lists and how she wants to do things right. The way she realizes she's in love with Jessica was great. And Jessica's, "Now?"...I don't know why it was one of my favorite bits but it was. This is brilliant, bud. Waiting patiently for part four and that "I dare you spank me". Don't let me down lol.

Edited at 2014-02-10 05:58 pm (UTC)
checkinyourbra: jessica03checkinyourbra on February 14th, 2014 06:30 am (UTC)
Boxxy!! :")

I....idkkkkk I'm so pleased that you liked it, bb!! Can you hear my girlish giggling from here??? :3 I loveeee writing Jessica being the confident tease...actually I like list-y Yoona, too. Gahhh I'll miss these characters. ;___;

Hehehe glad her realization worked out well. ^^ I love that you point out favorite parts. Helps me...learn about my readers...<_< Thanks, bb. Hope not to disappoint~~
jorgenzenjorgenzen on February 13th, 2014 07:19 am (UTC)
Hehe
I giggled, laughed a little (Sooyoung's character), smiled at the nicknames (I'm not really into fluff but yours work), and somehow got a little shy and - should I say, excited? :p, during the touring. As if someone could barge in and catch me reading. (Nothing wrong with that, I know. Haha)

Already had mental images of how it'll be but I should have known you're such a tease. :p

And oh! This might sound.. unexpected... but I love the interior conversation bits. As you move from one room to another, the topic does the same, and the readers too. My favourite bit is the child's room.

Holy crap, Jessica's “Yes, touch me there.” ?????? YES. Also, "I dare you to spank me." Enough said.



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checkinyourbra: jessica01checkinyourbra on February 14th, 2014 06:35 am (UTC)
Re: Hehe
BEAUTIFUL JORGEYFACE. :3

Idk why it never occurred to me that you wouldn't be a fluff fan. :OO Welp, now I'm extra flattered that you take the time to sit and read this fluff!fest. Hahaha awwwwwwwww @ you getting all shy!! That's preshush.

Another accusation of teasing!?!....yeahalittle.

Yaayyy!! The interior tour was one of my favorite parts--like a little montage of vignettes to keep things rollin'.

YES! TOUCHING. AND SPANKING. Omg what is my life?

Thanks for reading, love~~
sle3piesle3pie on February 22nd, 2014 10:22 pm (UTC)
Such cheesy nicknames.. I'm cringing.
That's a very memorable first date, now it's making me brand ramyun.
Have you been to seen performance art before, and was it anything like how you described.
One chapter left, this was very mildly rated.. So I'm presuming the last will be filled with more sexica.
Thanks for the update, and I hope your looking forward to the comeback, hopefully it won't be delayed to much longer.
checkinyourbra: jessica03checkinyourbra on February 28th, 2014 07:46 am (UTC)
Hahaha do pet names make you cringe? Pls tell me you and your gf use them. :DD

Mmm I could use some Ramyun rn, too. :Q__

I have seen perf art; nothing like THAT, though. I came up with it and I feel like it should happen irl. Yes, the ~ratedness~ builds up at each chapter then BAM we get part four!! :D

5EVER WAITING ON THE COMEBACK. IT SHALL BE GLORIOUS. I'm bopping to 유로파 (Europa) as I type this. :3 I hope you survived Jessica's teaser vid, btw. Omg.

Thankssss for enjoying, bb.♥♥
anhthud2 on February 26th, 2014 03:11 am (UTC)
doesn't matter if they're gay or straight or freakin unicorns, *this* is how you write first love. thanks man!

and you're not alone sica, sooyoung's magnificent artaestry was also one of the best laughs of my life. eataly hahahahaha you're fantastic
checkinyourbra: yoonsic01checkinyourbra on February 28th, 2014 07:47 am (UTC)
They're gay freakin' unicorns, actually. Yoonacorns? lolll. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that compliment meant everything! First love is so much fun to write!!

Yaaaaayyy Viva Eataly!!! xDDD

Thankssss, babe~
sataengsminion: pic#124684098sataengsminion on July 16th, 2015 06:30 am (UTC)
THIS IS YOU AND GURLFRAN HUH?

YOUR COLLEGE LOVE STORY. I SEE IT NOW. IT ALL MAKES SENSE! DD;

lol jk jk IM KIDDING STOP GLARING AT ME WOMAN!

I enjoyed the date too thanks for asking. Literally facepalmed with all the cheese being thrown around.

heh.
checkinyourbra: jessica05checkinyourbra on July 25th, 2015 04:02 am (UTC)
WHUH-WHAT?!?!?! THIS ISN'T AUTOBIOGRAPHICAL. I'M JUST PUTTING OUT MY FLUFFY SIDE. GAWD.

NO. I WON'T STOP GLARING.

Hehehe. Jk. I'm smiling >:333

You laaaahhhveddd the cheese~~~