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04 August 2013 @ 04:20 pm
Who Gets the Girl? [on-going]  

Title: Who Gets the Girl? [Chapter 21]

Players: Seohyun, Yuri, Hyoyeon, Mentions of Jessica, Yoona

Pairing(s): Seori, Mention of Seosic

Rating: R, for language

Genre: AU, Rom-Com Drama-Llama.

Warning(s): I pulverize ships, apparently.

Disclaimer: I don't own Soshi. I don't own anyone, in fact. All Fiction.

Chap. Summary: Seohyun’s lazy day off is interrupted by the drama brigade.

Author's Notes: Hope y’all enjoyed the sex because NOW I CAN THROW DRAMZ AROUND LOL. I always love your input in the comments. No matter how much virtual side-eye I receive. XD Also, I may or may not have participated in the Yoonyul Fanfic Contest. Lol.


21- Seohyun

For the first time in her college life, Seohyun skipped a school day. Her grades were stellar and she got all her projects out of the way, leaving a Wednesday to slack off. She stared at the ceiling, lazily drawing circles on her own torso and grinning. Thank god I finished that pesky design project. Now I can daydream all afternoon. About Jessica.

Jessica Jung. How could I have been so blind this whole time? A sexy, stylish woman right under my nose. Sunny’s going to definitely have a problem with this...if she finds out. Seohyun’s grin faded. Sunny really likes her. But, doesn’t Jessica have a say? What if she likes me more--then what happens? Do I forgo a potential fling due to some jealousy?

The girl slapped herself on the forehead. So hard, in fact, that she recoiled at the impact. Good god, Seohyun. You’re being evil. Sunny’s your best friend.

Yet, Jessica’s body was so soft and fragrant. Like kissing a flower.

A larger, more sinister grin stretched her features. My lips went everywhere.

She lifted the doodling hand into the air. And my fingers. She shuddered. They were inside her. I had my fingers inside a girl. And not any girl. Jessica. She took me to her apartment and I lost my virginity to her.

Seohyun rolled onto her stomach and squeezed a unicorn plushie. Why am I so giddy? It was just sex. Sex with the most amazing woman ever. She was so gentle. How she whispered sweet words into my ear and her high-pitched moans made me lose all my inhibitions. Who knew a simple act could do such a thing? Actually...whatever her fingers did to me were far from simple, that’s for sure.

She took out her phone to look through Jessica’s pictures on Facebook for the fourth time. I want her so badly right now. I know she said only one time, but I want more. She stopped short of texting her. I don’t want to be that obsessed first-timer following her around after a great night. But, it’s been a couple days. Maybe it’ll look casual. I should ask her out.

+Hey Jessica~ Would you be up for coffee this week? I miss you.

Seohyun stared at the sent text before adding, +Btw I think I left my clip there. Maybe I can pick it up one of these days? ;)

Nice. I Cinderella’d her. Now she has to see me again. Even if it’s just a quickie. Oh god, I’m addicted after the first go.

Pleased with her achievement, she shimmied a little dance to the impromptu song playing through her head. Sex, sex, lady sex. Lady sex with Jessica. Sex, sex, sexy sex. Lady Jess with sex.

Her eyes closed, allowing her mind to replay her favorite night’s events. She mentally debated about masturbating when a knock at the front door got her to her feet.

“Who is it?” She called out, heading toward the door. My parents are both at work. Who could it be? Oh, it’d be amazing if it was--

“Yuri.”

She stopped in her tracks. Yuri? But...why?

Sure enough, a sheepish tan woman stood at her front door, hands behind her back and swaying side-to-side. Seohyun fought off a smile. Sometimes, I wonder which of us is the younger one.

“Seohyun, you’re resplendent,” she sighed, eyes shooting down when they matched gazes.

“Thank you, Yuri.”

“Here,” Yuri whipped out a pink rose and held it with a stiff arm, “It’s not much. I wanted to say...I’m sorry.”

Seohyun clutched at the edge of the door. “Sorry for choosing Yoona?”

“Yes. I...I didn’t mean to propose to her. It just happened.”

The day Yuri told her--hours before the awkward Thai dinner--it felt like someone shot her in the chest. She wanted to talk to her friends about it, but Taeyeon ripped her a new one upon arrival. Frustrated and butthurt, she kept the engagement information to herself.

Sure, she expected that day to come, but not so soon. Getting intimate with an engaged person felt riskier than “behind the back of a cognizant department store mannequin” scenarios. Plus, she had to admit that she wanted to win. To have Yuri all to herself. Competing with years of domesticity became too exhausting of a battle.

“Shouldn’t your future wife be receiving this? Or, are there eleven other roses for her?”

Yuri’s eyes widened. “Damn.”

“Yeah. Damn.” She shook her head mockingly. Bitchface mode: activated.

“Seohyun. Hear me out. For a few minutes? Please.”

Seohyun’s eyes went through her to the car in the driveway. “Who’s that?”

“Hyo. She drove me here.”

“Right. Her.

Pleeeease, Seohyun.” She bounced a petal against her pointy nose. “If you don’t like what I tell you, I’ll leave.”

The younger girl stepped aside to let her in. She shot one more cold glimpse to the car before closing the door.

“Okay, speak.” Seohyun crossed her arms.

“D-don’t you want your flower?”

That face. That silly, sappy face. She looks so broken up. I want to kiss her pouty lips and make it all better, but we have to get things straight. “Didn’t you have something to tell me?”

“Wow-zers. Now I know how Hyo feels.” She laughed to herself and set the rose onto a table. “Okay so...I’m sorry. I apologize for bringing you into...this the wrong way. Wasn’t my intention.”

A pause. “I’m listening.”

“Right. Ah--um. You have every right to be mad at me. I shouldn’t have started anything that I couldn’t handle. It wasn’t fair to you nor Yoona.”

Seohyun cringed at the name.

“I thought Yoona was the one for me. We--she...I....” Yuri trailed off, fingers combing through her hair, ruffling the top. I still love that so much. “I was a fool. And a cheat.”

“Aren’t you telling this to the wrong person?”

“No. Because I feel like I cheated on you, too. You became more than an affair to me. I like the way you...poke out your lips when you’re drawing. And--and how you never have to raise your hand because the professor can assume that you know the answers. You’re awesome.”

Seohyun eyed the rose. It should be put in water before it wilts.

“I had to be honest to myself. An old friend asked me who I worry about hurting most once the truth comes out. I still don't know the answer to that, but here I am.”

“Meaning?”

“I told Yoona that I’m in love with you.”

Seohyun took a step back as if the words would stick to her clothes.

Welp, you did it, Seo Juhyun. Signed up for sexy Yuri sessions and didn’t read the fine print: Hot piece of woman may be a serial monogamist. “You can’t be serious, Yuri.”

“More serious than anything. Yoona broke up with me.”

Seohyun opened her mouth, but no sound came out. Yuri took this opportunity to close in and fold her into warm, quivery arms. Now I’m conflicted. Wasn’t I just dancing to the Sexy Jess song a few minutes ago?

But Yuri’s right here, telling me that she loves me. I’m infatuated with her, but is it love? Now that she’s single, is it worth a try?

“Say something.” Yuri’s eyes were intense, boring into her face. Seohyun had to turn away in case she could see her thoughts. “Please. Say anything.”

“I slept with someone.”

A heartbeat later, those same eyes reflected fear. “W-when?”

“The night after you told me the news.”

“Oh. But...with who?”

“Jessica.”

Yuri squinted and shook her head as if that simple name meant everything in the world. “Jessica? Jess-i-ca...

“Yes. She’s a friend of a friend.”

“And she...you two...”

“Yeah. She’s my first.”

A quiet swept over the house. Yuri’s grip slackened, but she didn’t let go. Seohyun watched a wave of conflicting emotions pour over the other girl’s face. Maybe this is the part when she short circuits and shuts down from a thought overload. Full, confused lips sputtered a few times until words came out coherently.

“C-can I be your second?”

“What?”

“I have no right to be mad at you. You’re a gorgeous, uncommitted individual.”

“You’re not mad?”

“I’m more disappointed than anything. That should have been me.”

Sleeping with Jessica and not having study parties with Yuri for the last few days bought her time to reflect on her feelings. Yuri had cancelled on Monday and she cancelled on Tuesday. It gave the impression that they needed their space. Yuri especially needed it, being engaged and all.

“You two looked so happy on Friday.”

“Friday?”

“At the Thai restaurant. I was there.”

Yuri nodded slowly, looking down in recollection. “Right. To be fair, we were drunk.”

“Drunk and happy.”

“Yoona’s started as a friend and it turned into a relationship. We have our fun. Doesn’t mean that we had no problems.”

“Still...I felt in over my head.”

Yuri pulled her back into a hug, running her hands through Seohyun’s long hair. The room remained silent while they held each other.

This conversation sucked all the oxygen from Seohyun’s lungs. She wondered if Yuri was holding her breath, too. Maybe deep down, I wanted things with Yuri to end. That’d make life so much easier. But now...what means the most to me?

“I missed seeing you last class,” Yuri hummed against her cheek. In addition to their lack of study dates, Yuri didn't attend their last class.

“You know we had a project due, right?”

She nodded. “Mmmhmm. I put my final version into Park's dropbox.”

“You’re so smart.”

Yuri’s grin against her face made her smile, too. I bet she doesn’t hear that one often. “So are you going to make up the in-class presentation part?”

“...the what?”

“It’s fifteen percent of the grade.”

Shit.

Seohyun moved to face her goofy lover. “You’re really funny.”

“I don’t try to be half the time.”

“That’s what makes you so special.”

“So,” Yuri pressed a wet kiss against her lips. “when should I take you for a romantic getaway? We could get out of the city. Spend a day at the beach. Check into a hotel.”

“Will that make us girlfriends?”

“I don’t care about our title. I just want to hold your hand and parade you around out in the open. We shouldn’t hide whatever this is.”

A giggle. “You want to parade me around? Like a trophy?”

Yuri shrugged. “Why not? You have the look.”

“You’re pretty trophy-ish yourself.”

“Then, we can show each other off.”

Yuri detached herself from Seohyun’s grip to reach for the rose. She bent down on one knee and looked up, giving puppy dog eyes. “Seohyun,” she said in a sing-song voice, holding out the flower, “will you be ...my trophy?”

Seohyun burst out laughing and accepted the offering. “Sure, just...” She tugged at the kneeling girl’s wrist. “get off your knee. None of that, please.”

“Gladly.” The tan girl went in for a deeper kiss, sliding both her hands along her neck.

The younger woman hungrily kissed back. For the first time, I have her all to myself. And I don’t have to share her with Im Yoona anymore. This realization had her clawing at the woman's back, mashing their bodies together.

Ow! Are you trying to mark me?” Yuri breathed, flinching at each pass.

“I don’t have to worry about scratching you anymore.”

“Mmm. You’re right.”

Screw all this worrying. Yuri’s here in my arms and it feels right. Seohyun relaxed her body, resting all her weight onto the other girl with her arms draped around her neck. Yuri took a firm hold of her backside and heaved it against her, adjusting to the shift.

Seohyun revelled in the strength. Jessica could never hold me like this. Yuri’s like my gallant prince. She brought her splayed fingers to Yuri’s forehead and pushed them through her hair. A long sigh escaped her mouth as she stroked the silky strands. The scent of tangy shampoo filled her nostrils. I could run my hands through her hair for hours.

“Am I forgiven?” Yuri purred.

Her palms gripped at the softness of her locks. This is seriously the best thing ever. It’s almost like sex. Almost.

“Seohyun, do you forgive me?”

The smallness of her voice brought her out of the hair trance. “Yes, Yuri. I do.”

“Great!” Yuri, with renewed vigor, eagerly reached to her pocket to retrieve her phone. “Can we take some pictures together now?”

Seohyun’s eyebrows wrinkled in bewilderment. “Um, sure?”

She watched a smiling Yuri unlock her phone and tap the camera icon. The woman held the phone in the air, detecting the best light quality for the photo.

“The artist at work,” she teased, picking up the forgotten rose from the floor.

“I want to make our pictures perfect.” Yuri wandered through the living room to find the best wall to serve as a backdrop. She held out an arm. “C’mon, cutie. Right over here.”

Seohyun held the rose to her face innocently as Yuri snapped away. She had to admit: they looked adorable together. Around the 4th picture, Yuri leaned over and placed a delicate peck on her cheek. She blushed and pushed her away.

“Whaaat?!” the older girl giggled, continually taking photos of a pink-faced Seohyun.

“These feel like couple pictures.”

A shrug. “Aren’t they?”

“You recently got out of a long-term relationship. Don’t you want to have fun before we...become an official item?”

“Being an official item is fun for me.”

“Are you sure you’re not going to get tired of me?”

That question sucked the smile right off her face. “You think that I’d cheat on you?”

Seohyun’s smile dulled as well. “I didn’t say that. I was joking around.”

“But you don’t think I would, right?”

“I really want you, Yuri. Still, you did tell me on our first study night that you’d want to date around. I shouldn’t hold you back if that what’s best for you.” What the hell? Why am I saying this? We should be making out, not arguing.

“I need you to trust me. I've been super confused lately.”

“You just broke up with...that person. I understand.”

“So, you trust me?”

“Yes.” I guess.

“I made Hyo drive around the whole campus looking for your car. When we didn’t see it, we came here. I really needed to surprise you in person.”

“Do I owe her gas money?”

Yuri snorted and slid her phone back into her jeans. “No, but I owe you something.”

Without another word, Yuri tugged the end of her shirt, pulling it over her head. Seohyun’s eyes stretched, drinking in the smooth curve of her upper body and the defined contours of her abs. Yuri rested her hands on her hips, more comfortable than she ever looked in class. The poor rose tumbled to the floor once more.

Seohyun prepared to pounce when the front door swiftly squeaked open and slammed.

Girls--” Hyoyeon barged in, stopping short when she saw Yuri in her bra. “So, you’re resolving your problems the old-fashioned way?”

Yuri rolled her eyes. “What do you want?”

“Oh right. Um...” Hyoyeon paused to listen. The others watched her expectantly. Sounds of a car door shut and approaching high heels had the three of them silently shooting alarmed glances to one another.

It’s Sunny.” Hyoyeon hissed, holding a finger to her mouth.

Shit shit shit!!” Yuri dashed for her thrown shirt on the couch, loudly slamming her leg into the coffee table. “Shiiiiiit. Gawwwd damnit! Ffffffuuu--”

Hyoyeon slapped a hand over her noisy friend’s mouth. “Bitch, you need to make yourself scarce.”

“But my shirt--”

“No time!” Seohyun pulled Yuri by the arm and practically threw her into the coat closet. The door closed with an audible click. Hyoyeon balled up the shirt and stuffed it into a vase.

“How do you know Sunny?!” Seohyun whispered, frantically smoothing her hair.

“Long story. The point is--she knows my car.”

“So, how will I explain you--”

The chime of the doorbell cut her off.

The two exchanged panicked faces as Seohyun chirped a pristine “Just a second!” and made her way to the front door.

Next Chapter: Tiffany!

Happy Soshiversary!! :3
 
 
Current Mood: mellowmellow
Current Music: SNSD- Run Devil Run
 
 
 
astrantiapetals: fashionable seoastrantiapetals on August 4th, 2013 08:54 pm (UTC)
Ooooh intense! Loved this update, thank you. Although i'm getting progressively more worried about Seohyun; don't want her to get hurt.

Thanks for the update! =)
checkinyourbracheckinyourbra on August 6th, 2013 06:51 am (UTC)
Why, thank you!! This one was super fun to write. XDDD

Hehe does Seohyun seem ~in danger~? *insertswhoopigif* We shall see~~~

Thanks for reading, bb!! *hugs*
yuukistar22yuukistar22 on August 5th, 2013 01:15 am (UTC)
Literally just cheered when i saw this update pop up on Soshipops

♪Sex, sex, lady sex. Lady sex with Jessica. Sex, sex, sexy sex. Lady Jess with sex. ♪ I-I NEED THIS AS A RINGTONE LIKE SO BAD D:

BOOM! Intense drama. BOOM! Official SeoRi *le gasp*. BOOM! My doppelganger Hyoyeon interrupting sexy time. BOOM! Panic at Sunny's unexpected visit.

Although SeoRi is hot, don't get me wrong it's HOT, i can't help but feel skeptical about Yuri's faithfulness to my Seobaby. Kwon Yuri, i gots my pervy eyes on youuuuuuuu.

Dammmmmnnn guuuuurl you were right about throwing the drama around. Shits getting intense yo! (mentally facepalming myself for saying that, i apologize)

I hope you did enter the YoonYul contest, you would win for sure. I was gonna enter but i sorta...somewhat...kinda....forgot....maybe next year i'll remember.

Annnnnnyway, before i ramble on about crap like i always doooo....

I will be right here waiting for you~ (yes i did just quote song lyrics, that's just how much i love you)

Thanks for the update bby!
checkinyourbra: watermeloncheckinyourbra on August 6th, 2013 07:01 am (UTC)
Hahahaha yessss that'd make a perfect ringtone, right? I can hear the tune playing in my head perfectly. Too bad I don't make musicsss. :(

BOOM DRAMA HERE. DRAMA THERE. BOOM BOOM BOOM. Now I can seriously picture you as WGTG Hyoyeon at her computer LOL.

CAN YOU TRUST YURI? I guess that's on Seohyun's mind, too. Or Jessica's boobs. Not sure yet. Keep that pervy eye on her, bb. ;)

That 'yo' part had me liking IRL. Nice. Ummmmm I don't see myself winning that, but I'm flattered at the thought. >.< I didn't get to put in 110% like I wanted. NEXT TIME YOU SHOULD ENTER.

Yayyyy singing~~~~

Thanks for commenting, bb. Laterrrr~~ :3
sonyuhshigay: Sunnysonyuhshigay on August 5th, 2013 02:25 am (UTC)
AAAHHHHH!!!!!! My Sunny is coming to rip Seohyun a new one. I bet it will be glorious omg can't wait.

Seohyun got one taste of sex and now she's an animal looool. Girl is gonna incur the wrath of a hundred angry lesbians if she keeps it up. But Yuri >_> ....is a mess. When she confessed to Seohyun and started getting coupley I was like, oh god why O___O That is one hell of a rebound. If I were Seohyun, I'd run fast in the other direction lol.

I am so so so excited for the drama. Sunny, Hyoyeon, Yuri, and Seohyun just seems like a good mix for some feisty arguments and I am READY.
checkinyourbracheckinyourbra on August 6th, 2013 07:03 am (UTC)
Are u prepared for SeoSun drama, my WGTG Sunsica shipper? Hmmmm, I may give you a bit. ;)

Seriously, who WOULDN'T be a sex!animal after Jessica!?! The wrath of a hundred lesbians sounds both scary and hot, tbh. Still, she best watch herself.

Oh, Yuri. That woman.

They make a fun combo, indeed.

Thanks so much. Until next time~~

Edited at 2013-08-06 07:07 am (UTC)
I la- la- la- love youregreted on August 5th, 2013 04:24 am (UTC)
leaving this cliffhanger just like that just right there pisses me off so much that i almost don't want to comment.

also because what?? you're playing with my feelings, seosic isn't supposed to be a thing and then i'm like okay seo, let out your sexica feels be one with the goddess. THEN!!!! you up and bring in yuri so i'm feeling anger that she's dropping my dear old jessibuns for yuri, THE CHEATER!!!!!!

oh gosh. then TIFFANY'S NEXT so that means i have to wait... ugh.


gosh i hate that you made me love you and your girls so freaking much.

happy soshiversary.

bye, i hate/love you.

Edited at 2013-08-05 04:25 am (UTC)
checkinyourbra: seohyun02checkinyourbra on August 6th, 2013 07:13 am (UTC)
:0 Oh dear. Yay/Sawry?

Was that cliffhanger too much? Haha no worries, you'll hear from those knuckleheads soon. Besides, YoonTaeNySic may contribute something interesting.

SO MANY EMOTIONS. Siva dropped just like that Is this a sign that her lucky streak wore off?

I could never hate you, but I heart you, too. Glad my bbs have your love. I mean, you ARE like their godmama.

Thanksss~
the_bluebeariesthe_bluebearies on August 5th, 2013 05:06 am (UTC)
wait a minute....
so... who does seohyun love? jessica? yuri? in the beginning of this chapter, I thought she's in love with yuri, until she was gaga-ing over jessica. and then yuri appeared, Jessica's forgotten. LOL!!

yuri oh yuri, her character makes me love and hate so much at the same time. "will u be my trophy?" that's like the cheesiest line ever. /I am cringing/ hahaha!! she can be such a jerk, and yet so sweet. xD

wait, why is yuri so panicky at the mention of sunny arriving??

ok, til next chapter then. tiffany!!!! (I assume the idiots laughing in the hallway were Taeyeon & tiffany? LOL.
checkinyourbracheckinyourbra on August 6th, 2013 07:18 am (UTC)
Love is such a ~strong~ word, isn't it? :3 Seohyun is flailing with these choices. Apparently Yuri's convenient presence tipped the scale LOL.

Hahahaha did that like make you cringe? GOOD.

I guess our dear Yuri made the assumption that Taeyeon would share her cheater info with Sunny. It'd probably be really awkward to run into her.

The one and only "idiot" couple: TaeNy! Haha

Thanks for reading, bb. :3
rilakkuyoonarilakkuyoona on August 5th, 2013 07:38 am (UTC)
At least I can look forward to your updates, when everything else is...growing duller. :/ School is approaching quickly, I don't want to go back. *creys* That means no more staying up to read WGTG and spazzing! Just thinking about it is painful. Ugh. So my sister returned home from her Vegas trip while I was reading this chapter. This is how it went down:
Me: Noooooooooo my ship-
Sister: *walks into room* Shut up! *looks at her bed* Where did my pillow go?
I'm surprised that I didn't hurl the iPad at her for rudely interrupting my moment of mourning. I am going to hide her pillows from her now.

Moving on, Seohyun was spazzing about lady sex with Jessica...who wouldn't? But that song. I like it. That should be the IGAB repackage song. It will be mah jam. Seohyun has to meet Jessica again but Sunny has the clip right? So she doesn't really...? And there is Yoonsic, with no room for Seohyun...unless Jessica pulls off a Yuri but I doubt she would. She seems to like Yoona very, very much. c:

Seori is cute. Dang. And Yuri took the whole Seosica!sex thing pretty well. I didn't really expect her to blow up about it anyway. 'Cause she's Yuri. And she be cool like that. They were gonna lady sex but Hyo shows up on the scene with news of Soonkyu's arrival. :OO SHIT IS GONNA GO DOWN FORREAL OMG. I have a feeling that if things get ugly, Yuri's topless self is gonna burst out out of the closet like, "DONTCHU TOUCH MY GORL!" Like a prince and shit. Yeah. Or totally fail somehow. 'Cause she's Yuri.

Yay, Taeny meets Yoona next chapter~ I'm excited for that~ I think my feels are off today because I'm on code red. And school. And Girls' Generation's 6th anniversary. And the perpetual absence of Taengsic. Taengsic :'(

But the Taeny meets Yoona chapter is next for now
checkinyourbra: seohyun02checkinyourbra on August 6th, 2013 07:26 am (UTC)
Wait--are u leaving me!??! D: FOR SCHOOL!?!?

Please tell me that you'll still be able to contribute your cray life/ commentary. I'll mish you. :(

Omg I forgot about the mourning on your ship. Eek. Not looking good rn. And I'm literally cackling at the confrontation with your sister. AS IF SHE NEEDS THAT PILLOW.

Jessica pulling a Yuri? Hmmmm. As for Seori, they are pretty presh, but so problematic right now. XD I wonder how helpful Yuri will be once the real dramz goes down. Her attacking whilst shirtless sounds hilarious.

Awwwww I hope your feels get back on track. Have fun on your return to school! Lolll. EDUCATION.

*hugs*
(no subject) - checkinyourbra on August 6th, 2013 07:43 am (UTC) (Expand)
sle3piesle3pie on August 5th, 2013 09:17 am (UTC)
Non stop drama, it's so hard to keep track of what's going on. I'm curious about who will see Seohyun's message, cause I'm wouldn't be happy to know about seosic. Wondering how sunny will react to seeing hyoyeon at Seohyun's.. hyoyeon finding out a seori hyosun.
Can't wait for Tiffany's chapter, will be nice to see what's going on with taeny, and hopeful thank you.. I'm going to just continue spazzing now.
checkinyourbra: seohyun02checkinyourbra on August 6th, 2013 07:32 am (UTC)
Bb hi!! Yessss. I'm dropping dram-bombs now. One of my favorite things, tbh.

My internets been mean lately. I have to type all my replies on my phone using 4g and it's taking FOREVS. *cries first-world tears* Idk how u handled thissss.

Good eye pointing out the text. I wonder who will see it, if anybody? Yeah, Taeny has been pretty MIA in their own little world lately. Let's shake things up. >;)

Spazz away, gorl!!!
하류cateyes330 on August 5th, 2013 06:22 pm (UTC)
"♪Sex, sex, lady sex. Lady sex with Jessica. Sex, sex, sexy sex. Lady Jess with sex. ♪"


I literally can sing this song all day! LMAO I don't know how serious you were about me being poetic, because I am no where close. I still lack so much T__T haha

Back to the story, Yuri showing up with roses =) Me like <3<3<3 Honestly I'm a secret Seori/Taeri shipper hahaha I don't know why, but when you pair up sexy Yuri with anyone, it just makes things steamier.

LOL And when I was hoping for a romantic proposal, you threw in this line ----> “will you be ...my trophy?”

Made me laugh so damn hard at how romantic, yet unromantic and dorky it is haha But what really got me laughing out loud was Hyoyeon's appearance. Seriously, I think she makes the best statements. “Bitch, you need to make yourself scarce.” HAHA Hyoyeon is awesome, too bad she will be forever alone... at least that's what it seems like now =D

P.s. I really like Seobaby's bitchface. I think it suits her calm/innocent personality. Oh and plus, I gave up on trying to figure out your characters and their motives. I shall not question who they actually have feelings for because that will only brain fuck me. haha

Edited at 2013-08-05 06:27 pm (UTC)
checkinyourbra: jessica02checkinyourbra on August 6th, 2013 07:42 am (UTC)
That song would make a lot of money. SNSD would attain more of the gay lady population's money if they just...steered in that direction. XD

YESSS. Poetic, bb. :3

Awwww are u a roses kinda girl? Glad u find that romantic. Hehe. Yuri's pretty dang hot. She would make ships mighty steamy, indeed. >:3

Hahahahahhaa dorky Yuri strikes again! The trophy comment is so her. Happy that it got some laughs out of you. :D

Yaaaaaayyy you appreciate Hyo and her marvelous delivery. XD she makes good comic relief while writing. :P Omg when people call my characters forever alone I get so sad for them. XD THEY'LL ALWAYS HAVE ME.

Seolady bitchface is perf. So is her normal face.

Hahaha you've given up on me. Ya sureeee you don't have any other predictions, bb?? Hmmmmm?
dashelots: hyodashelots on August 6th, 2013 12:16 pm (UTC)
Okay... so maybe being late is my thing... I'm not super happy about it but I'll accept it because OMG THIS WAS SITTING HERE FOR LIKE TWO DAYS BEFORE I READ IT. NOOOO.

The ending was the best, cliffhangers are my shit and never fail to draw me in, and this cliffhanger absolutely gripped my by the collar because it involves my bb Sunny and ahh I can totally see her fully intending on busting some skulls and getting to the bottom of the clip scandal but then wait, what, Hyo? water you doing here?? SOOO READY to see how this plays out. But before that it's time for the idiots and I'm so ready for that also, ahh, so much good stuff coming up, how u do this?

On to the actual chapter: Seohyun being all gooey over Jessica at the beginning was adorbs, there's more to the Seosic thing than I'd originally thought (at least from Seo's side of things 'cause I'm pretty sure Jessica's still basking in post-Yoona afterglow and all like Seohyun who?). The way Seohyun approaches love/lust/relationships/attention feels so youthful. It's so cute. And then Yuri - the big puppy - comes over and wins her back and I'm so confused with what I want to happen in this situation. WHO IS MY DESIRED ENDGAME? I DON'T EVEN KNOW ANYMORE. WHAT IS HAPPENING.

Okay, thank you for your comment about Tiffany not dying before her chapter, I wasn't exactly worried, but the reassurance was still nice. :P AYAYAY for the dramz~ to intensify and shit to get real. Can't wait to read more of you 'pulverizing ships' and smashing my heart into pieces. ♥

P.S. The level of dedication you have to this story is so :')
checkinyourbra: seohyun02checkinyourbra on August 7th, 2013 11:33 pm (UTC)
Yaaaaaayyy. You're so ~fashionably late~, but your comments are always worth the wait!! :D

I srsly squealed when I saw your name. :3

Cliffhangers, ahoy! Does this not happen often in WGTG? Ahhhh yes. Your bb Sunny and her poor widdle heart. And we all know Sunny--she's gonna get her info. XD LOL and Hyo's there--looking all sketch. I'm amused that so many people casually refer to TaeNy as "the idiots." Jessica's had such an impression.

YOUTHFUL. Omg what a perfect word for it. She seems a little new to everything, doesn't she? And sure enough--Seosic interactions aren't completely dead yet--but that could mean anything. AHHH DO U NOT KNOW WHAT TO WANT? Oh nos!!

That's something I can say with confidence: No characters die in WGTG. Ships may die, tho.

And thank youuuu. I really care. ♥

NOW GET BACK TO FIC-WRITING SCHOOLWORK!!!
stephanstarr on August 6th, 2013 02:57 pm (UTC)
"Nice. I Cinderella’d her."

^^^ that line made me laugh so hard idek why.

Anyway, wow SeoRi. It's like everyone's getting passed on to everyone lol. So that's it? YoonYul's done? DDD:
checkinyourbra: jessica02checkinyourbra on August 7th, 2013 11:34 pm (UTC)
Hehehehe happy to get some laughs. That Seolady's so cray. XD

Everyone's playing partner tag, apparently. AHHHH, BB. No matter who chooses Yuri/Yoona/Jessica, someone will be hurtttt. D:

Thanks for keeping up~~
kotegawa87kotegawa87 on August 6th, 2013 11:04 pm (UTC)
Oh my...!!!....
I ... i ... cann't saw LJ for a cohple of days and then... pafff there's an update and...
Bang my brain go crazy!!!!

Jajajaja
Well i love this... i mean first seo going crazy about gorjess (who doesn't)...
And they yuri... who really ... i don't know what to thinks about her...
Anyways...
Seo in her bitch mode was so awesome... first thinking about sunsica... and breaking whatever possibility she has with her crush...
And then with yuri...
Omo she's freaking sexy when she acts that way really...


Omg an now sunny... this is going to be so ....aaahhh
I don't have words....!!!
And really i can't wait for the next chapter...

You... you're so awesome... :D
:)
checkinyourbra: seohyun02checkinyourbra on August 7th, 2013 11:38 pm (UTC)
PAFFF!! An update for you!!! >:D A little crazy brain is good for ya!

Seohyun's everywhere in her mindset lately--swooning, lustful, spazzy, bitchy. Her bitch mode is flaw-free. Always. It's very sexy. :P

Sunny showed! Maybe she'll drop bombs on them!! XD

Hope you enjoy next chapter, too!! MORE IS HAPPENING.

Awwwww, bb. >.< You're awesome for sticking around. So loyal. :') ♥
 a.C.: seohyunplanet_ac on August 8th, 2013 08:20 am (UTC)
Oddly, the chapters I liked best are the SeoRi ones <3

It's funny how at the beginning of this chapter, Seohyun was spazzing over Jessica but when Yuri showed up, Jessica was immediately forgotten. So it's like hell, who's SicaNova when I have DonYuri? I laughed out loud at the imagery of Yuri on one knee holding that rose -- it's just so cheesy...sorry. Yuri's such a flake and irl, I would dislike such a person, but the way you have her portrayed here, she's just adorbs.

And you're right, you pulverize ships, you do :P

Next chapter, chop-chop, juseyo!

checkinyourbra: yuri01checkinyourbra on August 8th, 2013 08:34 am (UTC)
Seori's a nifty dynamic to write. Glad u enjoy. :3

Hahaha oh, Seohyun. Her heart changes with the wind~~ We all know people like that, amirite? SicaNova and DonYuri--perf names btw.

Oh, don't be sorry. Yuri's a hot, cheesy, flaky kinda girl. She's a HotPocket. XD Or some sorta danish. Can u tell that I'm hungry?

I have my dynamite. What ship is next? :P

It'll be soon, bb. :3 Thanks for reading!!
(Anonymous) on August 9th, 2013 02:11 pm (UTC)
Oh Boy! I'm so late!
I actually read this chapter the day you updated,but i have the time to comment properly only now :( I have to read the new update and i didn't comment this yet :(

Well let's start,shall we??

When i started reading it i sensed that something beautiful was going to happen. I mean there wasn't evilness in the air,the birds were singing,the goats were saying "HI" and my mum didn't shout "WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN LAST NIGHT??". It was SO obvious.
AND I WAS RIGHT!
MAAA SHIIP!

"Now I can daydream all afternoon."
*smile*
"About Jessica."
OMFGGG. I KNEEEEEEEEEW IT. UH UH UH UH I'M SO HAPPY! I GUESSED RIGHT!! YEAAYYYY!
"Jessica Jung. How could I have been so blind this whole time? A sexy, stylish woman right under my nose."
GORJESS!!! JESSICA GODDESS JUNG!!
"Sunny’s going to definitely have a problem with this...if she finds out."
Well Sunny knows and she's a little mad,but nothing that you can't handle...with a gun.
"Seohyun’s grin faded. Sunny really likes her. But, doesn’t Jessica have a say? What if she likes me more--then what happens? Do I forgo a potential fling due to some jealousy?
The girl slapped herself on the forehead. So hard, in fact, that she recoiled at the impact. Good god, Seohyun. You’re being evil. Sunny’s your best friend."

My grin faded a little too. But let's Jessica have a say in this,shall we??
"Yet, Jessica’s body was so soft and fragrant. Like kissing a flower."
mmmh PARADISE!!
"My lips went everywhere"
PARADISEEEEEE
"And my fingers"
ugh...UGH!!
"They were inside her. I had my fingers inside a girl. And not any girl. Jessica. She took me to her apartment and I lost my virginity to her."
UGHHHHHH!! *SEXUAL FRUSTRATION*

(Advertising break) --> "Seohyun rolled onto her stomach and squeezed a unicorn plushie"
Ehehehe ICWYDT ehehe. We all have an unicorn plushie,right?? Ahaha!

"Why am I so giddy? It was just sex. Sex with the most amazing woman ever."
IKR?? She's hot,she's so damn HOT...
"She was so gentle. How she whispered sweet words into my ear and her high-pitched moans made me lose all my inhibitions. Who knew a simple act could do such a thing? Actually...whatever her fingers did to me were far from simple, that’s for sure."
Sica has been gentle and oh my ...OH MYYYY!
THEY'RE SO CUTE AND HOT AT THE SAME TIMEEE!

Actually Seo 2 days are nothing,but yes text her anyway. It's not cool,but who cares. Ehemm you're clip it's not there anymore,but let's not tell it!!shhh!!
♪Sex, sex, lady sex. Lady sex with Jessica. Sex, sex, sexy sex. Lady Jess with sex. ♪ OH YEAH MY NEW RINGTONEEE :D *dance*

"She mentally debated about masturbating" OH MY LORD TAKE ME NOW!! YESS DOOO IT,I NEEDED IN MY LIFEE *NOSEBLEED*

...

NOOO YURI YOU...YOU PARTY POOPER!

Yeah,i know.Happens to ask someone to marry you just like that. It happened to me last night. I asked a girl to marry me despite i didn't know her. She said "NO" :( LOL

Oh my Yoonyul feelings. Yuri seems very into Seo tho. She's very cute and...r-r-romantic as f-fuck!!! *cringed* LOL

I'm reading all these Seo's interior thoughts and i'm happy.Seo don't try to convince yourself that Sica is not the right one for you. It doesn't work anyway. Give a try to Yuri,but you will come back to Sica after a while. It's destiny!!

Hyo,you savior LOL
OMO OMO OMO SunnyBunny is coming and is probably very mad,OMO!!Seo take the gun now!!
LOL Yuri in the closet half naked!!

Nice chappy as always and even if it's late late,good Soshiversary!! :D
Thank you so much!!

P.S We slowly reaching the end and i was thinking about how this ff could possibly end. If what i have in mind it's right,i will love you forever. And it's not all about Seosic. I will let you know if i was right or not obv.
P.S2 I voted in the pool. For whom do you think i voted?? *whistle*
P.S3 Did you expect a cry cry comment,right?? No,you don't fool me anymore dear. Desperation? Sadness? Not in my vocabulary!! I will always positive and loyal about MA SHIP. With respect and love i leave :)

Love ya <3










checkinyourbra: yuri01checkinyourbra on August 10th, 2013 04:03 pm (UTC)
CRAY ANON. OMG IT'S YOU.

No-one's ever too late. No worries!

"When i started reading it i sensed that something beautiful was going to happen. I mean there wasn't evilness in the air,the birds were singing,the goats were saying "HI" and my mum didn't shout "WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN LAST NIGHT??". It was SO obvious.
AND I WAS RIGHT!
MAAA SHIIP!" ----THIS. EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS COMMENT BRINGS ME JOY. I can't. hahahahaa dying so hard.

GURRRRRLLL. The play-by-play here. SO GREAT. You literally BROKE DOWN your feels. I'm so impressed I can't even. :0000 btw AHHAHAHAH your sexual frustration's just as palpable as Seohyun's. :P Like, I keep re-reading this. Your commentary is perf.

YAAAAYYY you brought up the unicorn plushie!! I was waiting for someone to mention it :D So gay.

Seriously. The Sexy Jess song should be recorded and sold. Like, SNSD doesn't know what they're missing. A LOT OF REVENUE WOULD COME FROM THIS.

Haaaaaa oh man--you were hoping for the self-touchy scene?! Sawryyyyy. *evil smirk*

WHAT?! I wanna hear more about this proposing story of yours!! Were u drunk? LOL

Yuri's a good mix of cringeworthy and romantic, methinks. What a cheesy gal. And see? Hyo came to save the day JUST FOR YOU. :P It's funny you mention a gun...I'll be mentioning a gun later on....:000000

Thanksssssss :DDDD

ps: Oh wow. I'm excited to see how close you were to getting thangs correct. I hope to surprise in the good way. *hugs*. I'm PRETTY sure I know who you voted for, you cray gorl. :D And I'm pleasantly surprised by this held-together comment. YAY POSITIVITY.

Heart you, toooo ^^ ♥

I can't wait to see your reaction to next chapter. I'm sure it'll be grand.
eescapeeescape on August 26th, 2013 12:29 am (UTC)
WHAT?
I had to paused in the middle of reading this and said ' how stupid is she (yuri)?' Oh my lord. How can she give up 4 years with Yoona, someone who clearly love her a lot to someone who initially just
want to get into her pant?

WTF what's worse is she choose to apologized and shit to Seohyun instead of Yoona?

I want to seriously hit her in the head to fix her damn stupid mind because i don't think she's using her brain right now. What the fuck, Yuri?

I was rooting for yoonyul the whole time but JFC I don't think Yuri ever deserve Yoona again, and if they do get back together, author, you better write some miracle shit cos' it not happening.
checkinyourbra: yuri01checkinyourbra on August 26th, 2013 03:29 am (UTC)
Re: WHAT?
OIC you lurking the chapters with Yuri. Is that your bias? :3

Hahaha idkkkk I guess the pressure got to Yuri. D:

"WTF what's worse is she choose to apologized and shit to Seohyun instead of Yoona?"--Oh snap, you're right!! ahah that is messed up.

Omg you're making me scared, bb. DON'T HURT ME. D:

Thanks for the comment, bb!! :D
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