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18 September 2013 @ 02:06 am
Who Gets the Girl? [on-going]  
Title: Who Gets the Girl? [Chapter 30]

Players: Yuri, Jessica, Sunny, Hyoyeon, Taeyeon, Tiffany, Seohyun, Mentions Yoona

Pairing(s): Yoonyul, Yulsic?, Featuring Yoonsic, Hyosun, and Taeny

Rating: R

Genre: AU, Rom-Com Drama-Llama.

Warning(s): I pulverize ships, apparently.

Disclaimer: I don't own Soshi. I don't own anyone, in fact. All Fiction.

Chap. Summary: A storm and a car give Yuri the chance to express herself more candidly.

Author's Notes: THE BIG 3-0!! Why did this chapter exhaust me? Yuri, your thought process fries my brain.

Let the awkward games begin.Collapse )
Current Mood: hungryhungry
Current Music: Brown Eyed Girls- Kill Bill(킬빌)
bluecod on September 20th, 2013 10:12 am (UTC)
I love how so many of my questions have been answered in this update!

It's nice that in Yuri's mind, an emergency meant something was wrong with Yoona. Now that she has had a taste of independence though, would she and Yoona work in a relationship anymore? I don't think so; sure they have their "home-cooked dinners" (which really, really means reconciliation, no?) but I don't think Yuri ever really knew what she wanted to do with herself. Fundamentally, Yoona wants marriage and Yuri doesn't know yet and won't commit. They're at different points in life I guess, and that's no way for them to move forward. Not to mention, the ugly pile of trust issues...

Btw even though I'm not the biggest fan of WGTG Yuri, the way you've written her is amazing, she's very much an amusing smorgasboard of mess.

Jessica's one liners are awesome! "You bitch manatee" (I had to google that, but am now fully converted tyvm). She's written really well too, it's so fun to read her bullying Yuri.

Anyhow, poor Jessica is back where she started; still single. Frankly, even if she got Yoona, would they work? I don't even know!! I only know that Jessica's ready to glomp on to someone, and so is Yoona; but that's another cray train right there...

The scene with 7 of them in the apartment was super fun; props for getting the flow of conversation right. It's funny that we get a much clearer glimpse of Hyo here too.

Edited at 2013-09-20 10:14 am (UTC)
checkinyourbra: yuri01checkinyourbra on September 22nd, 2013 01:30 am (UTC)
bluecod! It's you! *dances in place*

Questions answered in a chapter!? *cries tears of shock* Omg you don't know how much this makes me a happy camper. Really. I'm thrilled.

That whole chapter on YoonYul was (per usual) on point. So many conflicts, yet so much uncertainty.

"Btw even though I'm not the biggest fan of WGTG Yuri, the way you've written her is amazing, she's very much an amusing smorgasboard of mess."---I LOVE reading compliments like these. Seriously. I try my hardest to give everyone a shot at "explaining themselves" through their eyes. My characters may be cray, but I want them to be lovable/relatable cray. Thank youuuuuu.

Heheh manatees are SO cute. Thank goodness you're converted now. :3

Jessica is right back to her beginning state: Single and bitter. Wonder who'll get the glomping in the end!! :OOO

OT7= ♥ Maybe OT9 will happen, too.

dyestaindyestain on September 21st, 2013 09:49 am (UTC)
Hi again!
This whole chapter, uuuuugh

Not gonna lie, Yoonyul is super cute here. I don't even know what to think about Yuri anymore though hahaha

Hooray for sassy Jessica and biffle Hyo!
"Without killing eachother. Imagine that." "First regret." and "You bitch manatee!" had me laughing out loud; I seriously can't get enough of this woman's sass.

Hyo and Sunny are so loveable it hurts my heart. I can't even.

Yay for almost everyone being sort of friends/civil~

P.S. I voted for Sunny in your poll, because I think she's the perfect mix of crazy/collected (wow Yoona has lots of votes)

(I read this two days ago, but I was busy biting life back like you said so this comment is long overdue!)
checkinyourbra: yoona02checkinyourbra on September 22nd, 2013 01:34 am (UTC)
I hope that uuuuugh was sexual. XD hehe I kid, I kid

Cute Yoonyul IS cute.:3 And Yuri's confusing, yes. XD

Sassy!Jessica is tons of fun to write. I think I mentioned it in another comment, but I could seriously go on and on and on with their bickering. It's a treat. ^^ I take great pride in the manatee comment.

"Hyo and Sunny are so loveable it hurts my heart. I can't even."--IKR?! And I'm admitting this as Evil!Author. heheheheh

I agree. Civility makes things less stressful~


ps: Nice choice. I like that you want some crazy in there to keep things interesting. (Yoona is blowing up, isn't she!?! That girl's quietly popular)

Thank goodness you're biting life back. THATTA GURL. *high fives*
dyestaindyestain on September 26th, 2013 02:36 am (UTC)
It was a little ;)

You're super welcome!

Haha thanks for giving me that extra kick to help get my shit into gear! It means a lot <3

(Gonna go read the next chapter woo)
sle3piesle3pie on September 22nd, 2013 03:33 am (UTC)
Can't believe it's already been 30 chapters.. I guess this story is nearing it's end, thus they're all beginning to gather now.
The bet was hilarious, but then most of the characters have interesting connections with each other, thus the crazy character map.
Taeny seem to have hit another speed bump.. will the truth come out?!
Thanks for the update... and sorry about the late comment
checkinyourbra: yuri01checkinyourbra on September 22nd, 2013 03:41 am (UTC)
I knowwwwww. You've pretty much been here from the start. *hugs* Thanks for the ballin' idea to make the character map. It probably ruins my eyesight, but it helps me keep a good perspective on the connections.


Betting on friends is normal...right? XDDD Yeah, things are sorta winding down. Everyone knows one another. :')

Speed bumps can be tricky. WHO KNOWS!?!

Late or not, I love that you take the time to make them. Thanksss~~~~
kotegawa87kotegawa87 on September 23rd, 2013 02:04 am (UTC)
Well... i'm a little late... but here i am...
Ok... first...
Yuri always confused me the most...
I mean... she's really... something jajajaXD
But i guess... that's how her personality is... (in the fic of course XD)
Well poor sica...
She's so lonely... and i'm pretty sure she can love way to much...
But is too picky...

Then hyosun is sooo hylarious!!!...
I really like them...
Of course i like the idea of sunsica but... i'm pretty sure that it's not gonna happen... the sane as jeti jajajajajaa
So i'm just curious about the next chapter and how this is going to end :p....

Thanks for this amazing fic...
checkinyourbra: sunny01checkinyourbra on September 23rd, 2013 05:09 am (UTC)
Omg HIIIII!!!! *hugs*

Tis all good, bb. I'm glad you came by!! :D

Haha oh, Yuri. She's an acquired taste, definitely. Girl's always scrambled in the mind. XDDD And awwwww bbSica.

Hyosun's so perf. I love writing for them >.<

Awww bb. Sorry for any destroyed ships along this journey. <3

THANK YOUUUUU for being here from the very start. ^^ ♥♥
byunqbyunq on October 25th, 2013 06:06 am (UTC)
man is sucks! i love yul!!!
checkinyourbracheckinyourbra on October 27th, 2013 07:08 am (UTC)
Gurrrrrl lol. Yuri IS awesome, though.
byunqbyunq on December 11th, 2013 07:28 am (UTC)
YulTi Lover
yup trilion awesome!!!