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14 July 2013 @ 08:10 pm
Who Gets the Girl? [16]  

Title: Who Gets the Girl? [Chapter 16]

Players: Sooyoung, Jessica, Hyoyeon, Mentions of everyone else

Pairing(s): Mentioning Yoonyul, Yoonsic, Hyosun, and Taeny

Rating: pg-13 + some language

Genre: AU, Rom-Com Drama-Llama.

Warning(s): Nothing for this chapter.

Disclaimer: I don't own Soshi. I don't own anyone, in fact. All Fiction.

Chap. Summary: "Mystery woman" and Hyoyeon return to Sooyoung's bar to dish out their feelings.

Author's Notes: An update that didn't occur past midnight? Shocker! Also, I really appreciate the appearance of new readers! W00hoo!!

16- Sooyoung

Between serving afternoon customers, Sooyoung brought out her phone, mentally convincing herself to call Yoona. A dozen times, she typed out a text. She even hovered a thumb over 'send' in some instances. Much as she loved television (and real life) drama, fear of actually turning someone's life upside down made her kill the message.

Of all people. Yuri. I’d never guess. She’s as loyal as a puppy. Or, at least I thought so. Looks like this puppy wasn’t properly trained.

Sooyoung applied pressure to the shiny countertop she wiped in huge circles, replaying Yuri’s words in her head. Recalling how she slurred out this Seohyun lady’s name with so much affection, then laughed out loud about marrying Yoona. She clenched her jaw from the very thought of her boyfriend saying such a thing.

And apparently, they got to “second-and-a-half base”, whatever that means.

Yoona’s going to be devastated. Sooyoung pictured nineteen-year-old Im Yoona of yesteryear, still wielding her shoulder-length cut and starry eyes for a “dreamboat” she met in a college gaming club. Kwon Yuri. Yoona was painfully shy at the time, so the admission of a crush--let alone on a woman--caught the taller girl off guard.

Each night in their dorm, she’d hug her pillow and hash out details of Yuri’s daily outfit. That’s how Yoona described her. By clothing. I didn’t get it at first, but soon, it made sense.

“Yuri’s wearing a skirt today. She must be feeling confident.”

“Had sweats on during class. Poor thing didn’t get her rest.”

A faint smile spread across Sooyoung’s face. The day that Yuri blurted out that she liked her boobs, I got second-hand embarrassment from the story. Yoona said that it was so cute that she felt compelled to ask her out. Such a surprise from the quiet doe-eyed girl back then. Yuri brought out her assertive side. Encouraged her to break out of that shell.

She started a new text message for the thirteenth time, racking her mind for the most appropriate words. “We need to talk. It’s serious” would work.

Or maybe, “Kill Yuri now. You’ll thank me later.”

Completely invested in imaginary words on her screen, she didn’t hear the chiming of the front door nor the light squeak of someone claiming a stool at the bar.

“Text from your boyfriend, I presume,” a wry, soft voice uttered.

Sooyoung’s head bobbed up to find the frazzled blonde woman from earlier that week. “Hey. You’re back.”

“I have more bitching to do. First, a drink.”

“Two strong shots?”

She squeezed out a grin. “You got it, baby.”

In a matter of seconds, she prepared two full shot glasses and slid them in front of the openly moping woman. “What’s gotten you so down?”

“Remember the idiot friends I mentioned?”

The ones in love. “Yes I do.”

“They had...hold on.” She knocked back both shots, face scrunching at the bitterness. “They had...loud, moan-y sex late last night.”

Sooyoung pressed her lips together to hold back a laugh. “Really? While you were sleeping?”

“Correction. Trying to fall back asleep. Instead, I suffered through those whales bellowing until I gave up and put on my headphones.” She rubbed at the faint, foundation-covered bag under her eye.

Sooyoung finished mixing her a special new drink before answering. “That’s a shame. It was nice of you to let them have their fun, though.”

“Oh, I’m not nice.” She clutched the pink concoction before the glass touched the counter. “I would have murdered them if I went out there. No-one wants to see their personal possessions violated...I’ll have to burn that couch.”

The bartender gave a signal to a coworker. “So, what now?”

“The damage is done. She can have her.”

She watched the woman idly stir her drink with a skinny red straw.


Is there more? “Yes?”

“Something else happened. Which is why I’m here in the middle of a work day.”

“Come with me to a booth. I’m on break.”

They relocated to the farthest booth from the others. The one that occupied that horny couple. Sooyoung whipped out her chopsticks to begin her lunch as the woman continued in a hushed tone.

“The one woman from work...the beautiful one. She’s...uh...so, she’s usually the best at cheering me up, no matter what’s on my mind. I can count on her for very logical, practical advice.”

“Mmmhmm.” Sooyoung nodded, trying not to chew too noisily.

“Today, I was pissed off about not getting adequate sleep. The only thing that forced me out of bed was the thought of her greeting me with her smile. Then, I’d check out her tailor-made ensemble and we’d compliment each other’s clothes.”


“Afterwards, I fight the urge to kiss her while she talks about work or her stupid girlfriend.”

There’s a lot of stupid girlfriend going around.

“Now, get this. She was waiting for me when I got to work this morning. That never happens. Normally, I make my morning rounds around the office and spend the most time chatting at her desk. My heart raced at simply seeing her take the time to meet me...god, I feel so foolish.”

“What happened?”

She took a long drag from the straw and sighed. “She’s engaged.”


“She...” Her voice caught at the back of her throat. “met me for the first time at my desk...to tell me that her girlfriend proposed.”

Instinctively, Sooyoung reached a long arm out to rest on her shoulder. “I’m so sorry.”

“I know she didn’t do it to hurt me, but it felt so cruel.”

“I understand.”

“I heard about wedding plans, flowers.. It was so....ugh, I can’t.”

Right that moment, Sooyoung’s phone chirped. A text alert. She hastily grabbed it, politely excusing herself. It’s Yoona. I forgot all about telling her. She hit the message icon to read:

+Yuri proposed!!!! Tell you all the details tonight! Sorry for not texting you sooner; I’ve been on cloud nine all day.

This is too much to be a coincidence.

Sooyoung placed her phone in her lap and continued the conversation with a different tone. “Hey, could you show me a picture of the girl you like? You can say no if that’s too private.”

“Of course not. You and I've kissed, after all. That gives you some privilege.”

The taller girl struggled to keep her face panic-free as the blonde scrolled through her gallery.

“This is a good one. Not that she can take a bad picture.” She shimmied over to get closer. “I warn you: you may fall in love.”

Her jaw dropped. Sure enough, there sat her best friend in an office setting. Next to her was the blonde, with darker hair at the time, leaning her head against her shoulder. “She’s...she’s...”

“Beautiful, right? How will I function around this now that she’s engaged?”

“I’m sure you’ll find a way.” Just how Yuri found a way to bring marriage into this fiasco.

“Goddamnit, Sooyoung.”

Puzzled, she glanced at the blonde, who was already glaring at the intruder. There Hyoyeon stood, hands on her hips and already checking out the woman next to her.

“I’ve been looking for you and here you are, chatting it up with...” Hyoyeon raised her eyebrows expectantly.

“None of your business,” the woman deadpanned.

“Don’t break my heart, gorgeous.”

“What do you want?” Sooyoung cut in, brain still gripping around the current discoveries.

“Oh, right. I have important shit to tell you.”

“Can it wait?”

Hyoyeon checked her phone for the time. “Nope. I have a day event across town in an hour. Is your little date over?”

Bitchy after the slightest rejection. “You’re ridiculous, Hyo.”

“It’s fine.” The woman stood up from her half-finished drink and handed her money. “I’ll leave.”

“Please come back soon.”

“Sure.” She rolled her eyes at Hyoyeon’s arrogant grin.

Hyoyeon leered at the other blonde while she stepped around her and walked off.

“That’s a hot bitch,” she commented, pointing a finger.

“Like I said--what do you want? That was incredibly rude.”

She took a seat, eyeballing the leftover beverage. “Buddy, I have a big problem.”

Not as big as Yoona’s or that other girl’s. “Being?”

“I want a girlfriend.”

This IS news. “Really?! Why?”

“Why, indeed. Why would such a charmer as myself want to settle for only one fair maiden when there are so many possibilities out there?”

“I didn’t say all that.”

“I’ve been considering this for a couple days. Yoona’s ‘Omg marriage--I’m totally happy’ mass text sealed the deal. I realized that I’m tired of the hustle. Getting turned down by two ladies last night tapped into my deeply hidden yearning for a main squeeze. Maybe I’ll try it out again.”

“With Sunny?”

Hyoyeon brought the drink to her mouth. “Yeah.”

“Wow. Well, have you asked her?” Sooyoung knew for a fact that Sunny and Hyoyeon left together after the dancing died down. Hyo’s hand was practically up her dress before they vacated the building.

“We couldn’t wait to get to an apartment, so we fucked in my car. It was triumphant. Best sex I had since...ever. I think I came six or seven times.”

“Rookie,” Sooyoung teased, winking.

“Shut up. So, I thought to myself, ‘Why chase after random flighty chicks when I could have sex like this whenever I want?’. Sunny never disappoints in bed. And she gets me. She doesn’t become all needy or play things polite with me. I can appreciate those qualities.”

“Cute.” Sooyoung commenced to eating her lunch.

“I thought so, too. Anyways, following orgasm number five, I considered asking her out. For a date or something. Taking it to the next level. But then, I remembered all the times I’ve warned her about not falling for someone in a casual encounter-type relationship, so I said nothing. I couldn’t handle the thought of her calling me a hypocrite.”

“Wow, you’re actually thinking about another person’s feelings.”

Right!? Downright unnatural.”

“Does your shriveled little Hyoyeon heart skip a beat whenever she looks deep into your eyes?”

She rubbed at her reddening cheeks. “The hell, man? I’m glad I didn’t say any of that sappy shit.”


“Because while I was drilling into her like a well-oiled-machine...”

“Oh god.”

“...she called me another girl’s name.”

Sooyoung gasped, teeth attached to a piece of chicken.

“She whispered, ‘Oh, Jess’ into my ear. I pretended not to hear it.”


“Short for Jessica. I heard her talk to that ho on the phone before. They may have something going on.”

Sooyoung squinted up in thought, trying to recall the name. “I don’t know any Jessicas.”

“It’s crazy. Gives me the incentive to find this Jessica bitch and tell her to back up off my woman.”

“Sunny’s not your woman.”

“Not yet.”

A pause. Sooyoung gazed at the phone in her lap. “I need you to do me a favor, Hyo.”

“What’s up?”

“Keep an eye on Yuri.”

At that, Hyoyeon snapped her attention away from stuffing a sizeable ice cube into her mouth. “Yuri? Why?”

“I think she’s cheating on Yoona.”

Hyoyeon scoffed and shook her head, bemused. “Yeah right.”

“She admitted it to a friend of hers on Thursday.”

“While you were standing there?”

I even served their drinks and counted out Yuri’s crappy tip. “She was drunk. Besides, you know how oblivious she gets.”

Exactly. So, Yoona would catch on in a heartbeat.”

“Not necessarily. Yoona’s been viewing the world through wedding-shaped glasses for months. It wouldn’t be surprising for her to miss it.”

Hyoyeon sucked her teeth. “Right. And who would she find to have this alleged affair, hmm? She’s not the most resourceful human.”

“Somebody named Seohyun.”

Sooyoung raised her eyebrows when Hyoyeon nearly choked on the chunk of ice. She patted the shorter girl’s back as she composed herself.

“Do you know about Seohyun?”

Ugh. All I know is how frigid she is towards me.”

“You met her?”

“Unfortunately. At that stupid dinner. Explains all those dirty looks at Yoona.” She retrieved a phone from her pocket to start dialing, “I need to set this straight.”

“No!” A new course of action came to mind. Sooyoung grabbed at her wrist. “Give them a day.”

“Why the hell does she need a day?”

“Her friend advised for her to break it off with Seohyun or tell Yoona. Let’s give her the chance to do it before we meddle in their affairs.”

Hyoyeon didn’t seem convinced. She squeezed her arm.

“Please, Hyo. I have to hold back, too.”

One day.”

“That’s all I ask.”

The blonde stared down at her friend’s name on the screen. “Damnit, Yuri.”

Next Chapter: Jessica!


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Current Music: 2ne1- Falling in Love
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checkinyourbra: jessica02checkinyourbra on July 15th, 2013 12:41 am (UTC)
I'm gonna say WOW right back at you!

I hadn't even posted this on Soshipops and I already got your comment! XD

Hahahha thanks. There's a special place reserved in my brain/heart for these characters. XD

Yayyy!! I'm about to read your new update! *boogies*
kotegawa87kotegawa87 on July 15th, 2013 12:48 am (UTC)
Hello!... ^-^
And now... I can finally scream
Ok now i'm better...
Ok this chapter show so many things... Sooyoung is the smart one in this story...
That's pretty obvious...
And is she knows that jessica is the blonde girl.. Wauuuu she is going to get all the puzzle done...
So first jessi probably has some feelings for tiff... But she knows tae and tiffany has sex... So she give up... But i keep wondering... For how much time is taeng to like tiff... Or more important... When is she going to get bored of fany? Jojojojo

Second... Jessi is sufering for yoonyul's wedding already... :( my poor baby

Ok next...
Hyoyeon finally realice her feelings.... So she wants sunny all for herself...
The question is... Has sunny any feelings for her?
Mmm interesting...

And what about seori?
Yul has to end that affaird... But... I'm pretty sure she wants seo more than what she wants to admit
Damn it!
And on the next chapter finally our jessi is back...
Aaahhh i'm so curious right now!!!

I'm your fan really
checkinyourbra: sooyoung01checkinyourbra on July 15th, 2013 04:24 am (UTC)
Scream away, cutie!! :D

Sooyoung's definitely the info-grabber of the story. If every chapter was from her point of view, everything would probably be resolved in like 3 chapters! hahaha

Oh, so you think Taeny may have an expiration date? With her history and all...

It'll totes be interesting to see if sexual Hyosun turns into anything beyond that. :0

"I'm pretty sure she wants seo more than what she wants to admit"--Very interesting thought, you got there. Does Yuri just love the thrill of the affair or will it turn into anything? hmmm.

Awwww thanks bb. Stay curious and happy happy joy joy we can finally see what's going on in Jessica's head!
astrantiapetals: fashionable seoastrantiapetals on July 15th, 2013 01:03 am (UTC)
UGH my heart aches for Sica - I want her to find someone (preferably seohyun)!

This was a great update! Now back to hitting the books...
checkinyourbra: jessica02checkinyourbra on July 15th, 2013 04:27 am (UTC)
It's so easy to sympathize with Jessica, isn't it? So, next chapter will either SUPER please you or GREATLY disappoint LOL


W00hoooo Die Spielerin!! :D
yuukistar22yuukistar22 on July 15th, 2013 01:04 am (UTC)
I fucking knew it was Jessica at the bar before! YES YES YES....i need to stop swearing so much

Man it feels good to be right for once!

I had a huge grin on my face reading this entire chapter, you are a god

HA! I knew Jessica would be awake, i kinda expected that kind of icy response to Fany and Taeyeon's glorious sexy time.

Oh Jessi, if you don't want that sofa anymore i would be more than happy to take it off your hands....oh god what am i saying D:

Awww poor Hyoyeon, she's such a player and yet she was ready to commit to Sunny...during yummy sexy time...oh the images.....

Ooooo now Hyoyeon's getting looped in to the whole Yuri cheating thing...SO MUCH BUILD UP. MY BRAIN CAN PROCESS ALL THE SUSPENSE.

Everything is being pieced together so wonderfully

I REALLY can't wait until everything is revealed....well if it is revealed...

I love you and your updates fellow perv

As always, keep up the good work and i look forward to the next update

Edited at 2013-07-15 01:23 am (UTC)
checkinyourbra: sooyoung01checkinyourbra on July 15th, 2013 04:37 am (UTC)
Howdy, Fellow Perv!

It pleases me to hear that you've been guessing things correctly! Go you! haha I'm currently grinning knowing that you were grinning.

OMG GURL. You want the dirty, dirty couch blessed by Taeny lovemaking!? YOU WOULD. That's why you're the fellow perv. Jessica should just donate it to you.

Yep. Even when Hyo is contemplating commitment, it's in the middle of some steamy car sex. Sometimes I wonder if YOU'RE the Hyoyeon character irl....XD And now she knows about the cheating, too! More and more eyes and ears will make cheating life harder for the Yul.

Glad the process of piecing this puzzle together is satisfactory. I try. :D

THANK YOUUUUU :D Heart you, too!

I think next chapter will make your pervy brain happy.

 a.C.planet_ac on July 15th, 2013 02:13 am (UTC)
Sooyoung! Everybody's favorite straight girl! Wonder how she can calmly eat her lunch and not choke when Hyo's going on about orgasms and such.

And yes, Jessica should just burn that couch. She's such a sourpuss, so needy, crushing so badly on Yoona that I feel for her. Man, I love Jessica. In fact, I love all the characters, even that cheating piece of fruitcake, Yuri. I think SeoRi deserve each other - one devious and the other, flaky. Then maybe YoonSic will happen.

Gurrrl, I love your fic!
checkinyourbra: sooyoung01checkinyourbra on July 15th, 2013 04:43 am (UTC)
Sooyoung IS everyone's favorite straight girl! She's so darn observant. I'm gonna assume at as a bestie of the dirty-talker that is Kim Hyoyeon, she's very used to hearing her smutty stories. XD

"I love all the characters, even that cheating piece of fruitcake, Yuri."---DEAD. SO DEAD. Hahahahaha I love this so much. That describes her perfectly. I need to add that phrase into my day-to-day vocabulary.

Sourpuss!Jess. CheatingFruitcake!Yuri. Devious!Seohyun. Perfect.

Gurrrlll, I love your fic, too!! Update soon, please?

Thanks~~ :3
I la- la- la- love youregreted on July 15th, 2013 02:43 am (UTC)
um. this is the worst (best) chapter youve ever written i hate (love) it so much.

as a person following the story, i want everyone to be happy and fluffy fluffy fluff... but this being what it is that was never gonna happen.

as a curious bystander shit just got juicy as fuck. i mean the characters are closing in, hyo wants to kill sica, that's so unfair sica gets the worst stick always, anyhow.

also i was so right, i don't remember if i wrote to you about soo overhearing yul but i'm so happy i was right that's why soo being bff with yoona was such a big deal to me...

also... hyo and her lovely carsex wants to lay a claim on sunny... ooh she's gotta work for that one.

jessick should burn taeny with her couch... those sexy inconsiderate bitches.

maybe she could invite yoong to the burning and throw yul and seo into and then after the literal flames burn out they can go buy a new couch and quench the fires of their loins upon it with each other and be together and sexy forever.

but um realtalk, my predictions-- i think yuri's too dumb to confess, she wants seo so bad, she likes the thrill of cheating on yoong, she doesn't want to lose her so she will probably marry her, but idk now that hyo and soo know shits gonna get harder, and when yoona goes after seo, taesun are gonna be pissed. i bet the big scene like the climax is gonna be at soo's bar... that's the common ground.

and ive been holding thing in the whole time.... FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK this chapter is insane.
checkinyourbra: jessica02checkinyourbra on July 15th, 2013 04:50 am (UTC)
Well you're the worst (best) commenter and you're terrible (wonderful) at breaking this story down.

LOL Sorry, Fluff doesn't come naturally for this story. XD

"hyo wants to kill sica, that's so unfair sica gets the worst stick always, anyhow." I literally LOL'd at this. So much. ARE U QUESTIONING MY LOVE FOR THE JESSICA CHARACTER? bahahaha

Good job at figuring out the lurking bartender. You know that girl's gonna be around to garner such juicy info--esp. if it involves her bestie. I'm still really flattered by you double-checking the first Sooyoung chapter. :3

Hyo has to work for Sunny love? Gurl, you ain't neva lie! haha

That whole "burn-couch-Taeny-Seori-then-Yoonsic-sex" scenario was perfect in every way. If I wanted to end the story abruptly, this is the way to go.

Can you see my nodding/shaking my head/side-eyeing your predictions? I hope so.

Soooo happy you found the chapter entertaining!! Until next time~~
sle3piesle3pie on July 15th, 2013 09:40 am (UTC)
It's all coming together now.. slowly, but surely, I think I'll leave the chart to you, its getting messy, with so many things going on, and your doing an amazing job with it. Hopefully Sooyoung will help Jessica get with her best friend.. so pairings are looking like Yoonsic, Taeny, Hyosun, Seori, and Sooyoung with her boyfriend, but I wouldn't be surprised if you threw a few curve balls, and messed all that up. Back to the drama indeed, I wonder what Jessica will do now that Yoona's engaged, I'm expecting her to take it out on her roommates, though for good reason.

Thanks for the weekly dose of drama, it was awesome.
checkinyourbra: jessica01checkinyourbra on July 16th, 2013 12:17 am (UTC)
Yes, slowly but surely indeed. Hope it's not meandering. D: And I don't mind keeping track of the chart; I got a good groove going on. hehehe. thanks so much for the ballin' idea!! :D

No matter the couple, I'm all about the journey rather than the destination. B) I hope my curve balls are fun. Lol. Balls.

Poor Sica. As if she needs more things to worry about. LOL I think taking out her rage on the sexin' roommates would be a good start!

You're very welcome! Thanks for the great commentary. XD
rilakkuyoonarilakkuyoona on July 15th, 2013 09:59 am (UTC)
Why...my iPad's battery was running low but I checked and saw that YOU UPDATED. And I HAVE FEELINGS NOW, even though I planned to go to bed soon. I have to wake up early to walk my sister's boyfriend's dog, BUT THIS UPDATE. Somehow, the whole family (including the dog) is sleeping in my bedroom, but I don't even care anymore at this point that I stirred my nephew awake by hissing 'Jessicaaaaaa'. BECAUSE THIS UPDATE.

I lurve straight bartender Sooyoung, who is somehow involved in the drama of several remarkably attractive not-straight women.. First up, Yoona is so precious, but a bestie's gotta do what a bestie's gotta do. Snitches get stitches though, Sooyoung. Lol, just kidding. Really.

And poor poor Jessica, she found out about both. :( And it seems that she's giving up on Tiffany because Taeyeon got her stubby fingers into the woman first. AND she has to burn her couch. Tsk, Taeny. Maybe she'll throw them into the fire too. She took it better than I thought, especially since she heard them, loudly and clearly (whales LOL). And HOLD UP, Jessica kissed Yoona ?! *snaps fingers in a Z formation* Sica you ho, laying yo lips on all them womens. (What about me?)

And Hyo, oh Hyo, your shriveled up heart is still denying feelings for Sunny, huh? It's ok, you're getting there. AND OH, THE DRAMATIC IRONY, names are such important parts of people, aren't they?

One day, and THEN ALL HE'LL WILL BREAK LOOSE! I'm gonna brace myself for it. A pillow to mute the fangirling, or my sister is gonna wake up thinking that I'm being murdered next to her. Hopefully I don't accidentally suffocate myself or something. Because I will miss the next updates. :'(

AND JESSICA! JESSICAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ She wrecked my bias list as of recent, finishing it off by stomping into it with her pair of perfect flawless legs. Looking forward to the next update, SHE NEEDS LOVE!

I have more to say but my nephew just flung himself against the side of my bed and startled my sister awake, and the woman is giving me looks now. I think the iPad is illuminating my 'Ermahgerd' face. Anyway, here's a hasty farewell~
checkinyourbra: jessica02checkinyourbra on July 16th, 2013 12:24 am (UTC)
OMG HAHAHHAHAH YOU AND THESE FAMILY STORIES. Keep it up~~I LOVE THEM. XDDDDD Look at you having all these FEELINGS in a room filled with people and the doggy!! hahah. That's so amazing.

Isn't Sooyoung such a presh straightie? Surrounded by lesbians, but she can keep the clear head. Go her. LOL that snitching comment. Well...

"Taeyeon got her stubby fingers into the woman first." LAWWWD. What an accurate way of putting it, bb! And yet ANOTHER suggestion to throw Taeny into the fire. Now, ya'll know you'd be freaking out if that came to pass! They're loud, whale-ish sex was rude, but so necessary. XD

Ummmm. Jess hasn't kissed Yoona yet. She just has urges. Give it time.

Hyo the ho. Irony all around. She's very sexually liberated, yes. :D

DON'T SUFFOCATE YOURSELF. They'll look at the last thing you were reading, track me down, and make me feel awful for indirectly killing you. :(((( Jessica's REALLY good at climbing bias lists. She did the same for me! She'll get love.....I hope.

Let your family rest, woman!!! I can only picture what your 'Ermahgerd' face looks like in the glow of your iPad. Priceless!!

Thanks for the HILARIOUS reply!
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whyyyyyyyparachuterawr on July 15th, 2013 11:29 am (UTC)
I'm leaving you a comment.

*btw this shit is all messed up. Good luck fixing it! haha

(and... by shit I mean the girls. 9 freaking girls. Idk how do you keep up with all their relationships)

can't wait for Jessica!

Edited at 2013-07-15 09:09 pm (UTC)
checkinyourbra: jessica02checkinyourbra on July 16th, 2013 12:13 am (UTC)
I'm replying to your comment.

These girls are all over the place. IS THAT A CHALLENGE?! I'll try my best to clean up this hot mess.

Thanks for reading and yayyy Jess!!! :D
the_bluebeariesthe_bluebearies on July 15th, 2013 02:53 pm (UTC)
" I suffered through those whales bellowing until I gave up and put on my headphones.”
that's my favourite line. puhahahha!!! my brain almost almost went into combustion while trying to imagine just how loud they were. oh my~

one question, why did u write it as a "mystery woman" talking to sooyoung at the bar? hmmm... cos that's sure sounded like someone we already know... hmmm... /strokes imaginary long beard/

"oh Jess..." I can imagine hyo's face when sunny said that. I was like OH SHIT!! it's not a very... err nice thing when you're doing someone and the someone said someone ELSE's name, that sure sucked!

next chapter: jessica, can't wait!!! ^^

ps: how many chapters did you (kinda) plan for this story?

Edited at 2013-07-15 02:56 pm (UTC)
checkinyourbra: sooyoung01checkinyourbra on July 16th, 2013 12:12 am (UTC)
Haahahah glad that line entertained you.

Maybe after round one, they gradually became louder and louder until they no longer cared. XD

Oh, I say "mystery woman" because Sooyoung doesn't know that it's Jessica that she's speaking to, which is why her name isn't revealed while they talk. It's like 3rd person limited POV. Makes it more interesting to read when she's a ~secret~, too. hehe

I'd lose my mind if someone whispered the wrong name in the throes of passion. Just when Hyo was about to confess her feelings, too. But, you know I can't make it that easy for her. ;D

Jessiiiii :D

Ummmm...I'll probably reveal the *magic number* within the next few chapters. I don't wanna jinx myself. But there is a set number goal. :3

Thanks for readingggg~~~
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(Anonymous) on July 15th, 2013 04:28 pm (UTC)
yuri's a fucking asshole, i'll never forgive her (in this story, i fucking love yuri irl)

;'( i refuse to read properly because i'm waiting for the ending, but i keep on spoiling it. :(

checkinyourbra: yoona02checkinyourbra on July 16th, 2013 12:07 am (UTC)
LOL oh no. Distressed about Yuri? I'm sawry, bb. D:

Read whatever way is best for you ^__^ LOL hopefully you won't spoil yourself too much. :3
dashelotsdashelots on July 16th, 2013 01:38 am (UTC)

Anyways, yayay, excellent chapter. This was definitely something I was anticipating - soshi coming together and realising that everyone loves everyone, things are awkward and they're all just too hot for life. YES.

Poor Jessi having to go through the totally traumatic experience of listening to the Taeny sex. I say burn the couch and force them to sleep on the floor or in Jessica's cage from now on! heheh.

The sensible human being is so flawless. She's such a good friend/person and it makes me really happy. I just have all the feelings for her and her role in this story. I like that Hyoyeon already doesn't like Jessica even though the doesn't know the Jessica's the one who Sunny's in love with, ooh la la~ Mwahaha what's gonna happen.

Everything's coming together so beautifully that I almost feel like I know what you've got coming up, but I also know that a lot of what I'm predicting will be super wrong, so I shall refrain from vocalising my thoughts. >.<

In short: I love Sooyoung, Hyoyeon's still hilarious, I can pretty much feel that a bomb is about to drop, and 'Next Chapter: Jessica!' oh all my cries, I'm so ready for this you have no idea.

Thank you, oh wise one. :) This brightens my life.

(P.S. you better not be trolling and actually have the next chapter revolving around Jessica the snake, omg.) :O
checkinyourbra: taeyeon01checkinyourbra on July 16th, 2013 03:45 am (UTC)
Hehehehe are you late, or ENDING THE COMMENTS WITH A BANG?! :D

I like the phrase "too hot for life." I may need to start saying that. Their little orbits are slowly overlappingggg.

Hahaha you know I had to put Jessica through that. As if she's not angry enough. LOL stuff them in with Snake!Jessica? I'm sure Taeyeon wouldn't mind, but Tiffany would freak the heck out.

Isn't she sensible and sweet? Someone well-adjusted is key to things getting done. Someone who's not ready to sleep with one of them!! XD I'm glad you heart her. :3 LOL oh, Hyo. SO CLOSE to Jessica, already getting bad vibes, and then you let her go. Thank goodness, I don't think Sica needed a fight on top of her bad day.

"Everything's coming together so beautifully that I almost feel like I know what you've got coming up"--Oh, do you? DO YOU? Let's see how Jessica's chapter goes. I'd like to hear your thoughts anyways.

Everybody and their mother missed dear, sad Jessica. Let's hope that her chapter isn't completely depressing, shall we? XD

Thank YOUUUU for being there to brighten my LJ feed!! haha

ps: LOLLLLLL I TOTES SHOULD. It can be a whole chapter about her craving mice and watching Taeny have sex all day....wait.....
zero89zero0211 on July 16th, 2013 03:37 am (UTC)
lol..jessica is awake when taeny did it..haha..poor girl trying to fall back to sleep after that XD
o wait..yoonsic kissed???! yes! yoonsic!! <3 they could hv a future together if yuri didnt blurt out about the marriage..tch..yoona is happy though..but my sicabb is hurt by it T__T
woah..hyoyeon finally wants to commit to sunny! okay...but sunny likes sica! she even called out her name when they did it..ouch >_< oh well, goodluck hyo XD
thanks for the update ^^
checkinyourbra: jessica02checkinyourbra on July 16th, 2013 03:49 am (UTC)
I don't know how she stayed in her room without going ballistic. I WOULD....wait. Nvm if Taeny were sexing it up in the next room, I'd call all my friends to brag.

Ohhhhh maybe it didn't come off well. She meant that Sooyoung had privilege since she and Jessica shared that one kiss. Her lips haven't had contact with the super-special Yoona lips. SHE'S NOT WORTHY YET. XD

Hyo needs all the luck in the world because Sica is stiff competition...even if her life is a wreck right now. LOL

Thanks for commenting, bb~~~
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(Anonymous) on July 16th, 2013 05:09 pm (UTC)
It's about time!!! and Im just sitting here with my popcorn and soda, waiting for these dramas to unravel. Yasssssss, I love me some dramas >:D

when can we get another seckshi time btw?? *massive seedy face* heheee

big virtual hug from a particular T-rex ;D


checkinyourbra: sooyoung01checkinyourbra on July 17th, 2013 04:55 am (UTC)
My favorite dino!! ♥

Well, I hope you have some popcorn left because I just updated. >:D

Omigosh you and that perviness. You better be glad I have a similar mindset. XD

I'll do most of the hugging. T-rex arms are short~~


(Anonymous) on July 16th, 2013 07:33 pm (UTC)
Ok,i'm right here captain.

Soo i'm with you,i thought that traitorusedtobealoyalpuppyuurghmyheartyouhaveagirlfriend Yuri was incapable to do something so vicious too,but we were wrong.

But still i don't know what i want.

I want Soo to tell everything to Yoona? No,because my Yoonyool heart can't handle a break up...
so I want that Yoona will never find out about it?? yeah...no,i want Yoonsic!


Yoona you're a perfect girlfriend...sigh.

Yuri gfrerjkwhvfknreg rhg vrhwehguirhuighriwev grhuhgurhewuihrivwg w ghruweg.(translation: gfrerjkwhvfknreg rhg vrhwehguirhuighriwev grhuhgurhewuihrivwg w ghruweg...sorry imposssible to translate...the language is too strong)

Oh SICA...SICAAAAA...SICA is aliveeeee *dance*

My poor sweet Sica,she heard all the sex noises from those two insensible and she knows now that Yoona is engaged.


So now she gave up on Fany,but she will have difficulties to give up on Yoona (is right to think that she is more into Yoona than Fany??)

It's official,i'm sad to announce that i definitely don't like Hyo (in the fanfiction ofc). :(

Ok,we knew that Hyo had feelings for Sunny,nothing new here. What is new is the fact that she is actually ready to fight for her.

Yeah darling,but remember that you are against nothing less than Sica...

She came 6 or 7 times?? What?? Is even humanly possibly?? LOL

She called another name when she came...



OK,I STOP. Well i'm a little sorry fo Hyo actually,it's a bad situation to affront.

It's also hilarious that the girl was Sica,the girl that she saw and kind knew a moment ago. LOL

Hyo now also know the situation and if in one day traitorusedtobealoyalpuppyuurghmyheartyouhaveagirlfriend Yuri will don't do anything,Hyo will do everything for her.

The countdown is started...

Next chapter...SICAAAAAAAAA?!!??!!? Wooohohohohohoho yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy!!!

She will punch someone,i'm sure of it #soproudofher

P:S Soo is the point in common.Soo is in the middle of everything.Soo knows everything.Soo has every information in her hands.Soo can ruin every relationships in 1 minute.

ooohhhh ...I've got the power~ LOL

P.S 2 It will be sweet of you to update fast...what about N.O.W??
It's Sica chapter,it's IMPORTANT!!
If i refresh the page and there isn't the chapter,i will wait you in front of your house...

jk :D

Compliments for the chapter and see ya always to the next chappy :D BYEEEEEEEE

checkinyourbra: yoona02checkinyourbra on July 17th, 2013 05:00 am (UTC)

And your comment did NOT disappoint. AHHAHAHAHAH

That ultra long name for Yuri is so fitting/hilarious. And this: #worstandmostdifficultdecisioninwholemylife HAHAHAHAH bb this CAN'T be the most difficult decision. Or do you live a really easy life!?!? Kudos!

Yessssss bbSica is alive and kickin'. I wouldn't kill her for anything. ^^

Ooooooo what an ~exotic~ and fascinating language. Where does one go to learn it? You seem to be quite fluent. XD

Awwwwww u don't like Hyo? haha well, there's always the certain personality types that irk us. I understand, though I LOVE my Hyoyeon. (because she's MINE, obvs.) AND HOW DARE YOU LAUGH AT HER UNFORTUNATE INCIDENT. I'm just kidding. Laugh away. I respect your cray cray reactions. bahaha

Countdown, indeed......


Sooyoung is VERY important. She knows enough to change lives. Glad it's in her capable hands...

Is that you standing out there? I just updated, sooooooo DON'T HURT ME. D:...hehe

Thank YOU for continuing to be awesome/entertaining. Byeeee~~
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