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29 August 2013 @ 12:11 am
Who Gets the Girl? [on-going]  

Title: Who Gets the Girl? [Chapter 26]

Players: Taeyeon, Jessica, Seohyun, Featuring Tiffany

Pairing(s): Taengsic, Seosica, Taeny

Rating: PG-13 + some language

Genre: AU, Rom-Com Drama-Llama.

Warning(s): I pulverize ships, apparently. This chapter ends kinda gross.

Disclaimer: I don't own Soshi. I don't own anyone, in fact. All Fiction.

Chap. Summary: Drunk and unhappy, Jessica starts to wonder about her closer, more accessible options.

Author's Notes: WOW! A big reaction from Yuri’s chapter. Each characters’ final chapters after this. Come out of your lurking and say a lil somethin’! Don’t wanna miss out on the fun before THE END. XD...*creys*

But, I'm still here.Collapse )
Current Mood: bouncybouncy
Current Music: Jessica and Park Myungsoo ~ Naengmyun
dyestaindyestain on August 31st, 2013 03:30 pm (UTC)
Fuck-being-an-adult-Taeyeon is nearly as awesome as drunk Taeyeon, and drunk Tae is pretty damn funny.
I love the dynamic that you've created between Taeyeon and Jessica. The constant bickering and quips are so much fun and it reminds me of how I act with some of my friends ;)

Like someone else commented before, Jessica can get with anyone. Hot damn, this woman is making the rounds and drama just seems to follow her! Some of the lines you wrote for her (and for the Taeyeon/Jessica conversations) are just brilliant and actually had me laughing out loud. Aaand your drunk vomitting scene was scarily accurate (been there done that a few too many times and omfg it is horrible haha)

It seems like the power has shifted a little here; Seohyun must know that Jessica is, at the very least, still attracted to her, so if she wanted to make Yoona feel like shit she probably could?

I voted in your poll; as much as I wanted to vote Hyo, I voted Yoona because I feel as though her decision making process is something along the lines of what I'd do. How do you feel about the results?

Looking forward to the next chapter! <3

(Also you replied to a comment of mine and said you liked my lj name and I'm so flattered haha it's really just a random phrase that I plucked out of the air. You're so sweet :) )
checkinyourbra: jessica02checkinyourbra on August 31st, 2013 11:12 pm (UTC)
"Fuck-being-an-adult-Taeyeon is nearly as awesome as drunk Taeyeon"--WORD. UP.

Hehehe I'm glad the bickering sound natural. That's exactly how I act with my buddies, too! It's the best. :')

Jessica shines bright like a diamond, but will anyone actually DATE her? We shall see...

Brilliant?! *blushes* Oh, um...hehe thanks. I love making people laugh. That's why I'm here! I'm also here to make noses bleed with smut every now and then Ooooohhh......How many times is a few too many? I'm intrigued. :0

There is a power shift. Nice of you to notice. ;)

That's a good way to go about it. It's cool that you put thought into your answer. :D The results are pretty cool--I'm super interested in people who've said that Seohyun, Yuri, and Tiffany relate to them. I'd love to know their rationale. :D

Hehehe well, that random phrase served you well! I think it's SO adorbs. :D ♥

Until next time~~~
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checkinyourbra: jessica02checkinyourbra on September 3rd, 2013 04:57 am (UTC)
But now you're here. THE PARTY'S JUST BEGUN. *dances in an empty room* >:D

Dysfunctional is a good word. I'm sure it's used in a later chapter.

Hehehe a slimy chapter? I'll take it as a compliment. Thanks, kid. ;D

Can't wait to read your next update~~
(Anonymous) on September 2nd, 2013 07:03 pm (UTC)
Oh my god,i'm so excited.
I'm laughing like an imbecile. I always laugh when i'm excited.
Ahhhh i can't read it. I can't,i'm too...ok,i will read it.

*Deep breathe*


"A couple years back..."
...WTF?? *Start sobbing*

"Who knows what disgusting things have happened on it."
Ewww LOL

“That’s no excuse to be such a jerk. Did you punch him in the balls?”
“I don’t want my hands near his balls, thank you very much.”
“Or any balls.”
Taeyeon lowered the controller into her lap. “You know what’s gross about balls?”
“Oh god, you’re not going to do this.”
“They’re like...two uneven clumps of flesh wrapped up in saggy--”
“Saggy loose skin. That droop underneath him. At all times.”
"You’re disgusting.”
“No, that asshole’s balls are disgusting. And his asshole. That asshole’s asshole is the most disgusting thing on the planet.”
A groan preceded a very lazy whack to Taeyeon’s arm.
“Next time you see him--remember that he has drooping, saggy balls in his pants. This is how you win the battle.”

WTH did i just read?? I actually read about BALLS? THOSE BALLS? ...eew.

"The shorter girl sprung from the couch, leaving Jessica to land onto the cushion. Direct skin contact with this damned couch will probably give me face chlamydia. I’m too exhausted to move."
I'm laughing in a very weird way right now.

“Get up or I’ll describe what my last girlfriend did on that couch in excruciating detail. In fact, I recall a particularly memorable moment where you’re laying your face..”

"She has like eight kids now"
Dear lady,you don't have a job,a hobbie or something else to do instead of "boogie woogie" with your partner?

Oh! So it went like this.
I quostioned some time ago Taeyeon's sentiments (and Jessica's as well) and here there are my conclusions:

Taeyeon did it for kidness and because she wouldn't be unhappy to have a girlfriend like Jessica.
Jessica agreed,'cause it's good to have a backup girlfriend,especially if your love life sucks. She doesn't like in that way Tae,but better than nothing i guess.
I'm sure that there aren't deep feelings involved between them.
Nice act of kidness from Tae. Despite all the mess that she created,she's a nice friend. Not everyone would be willing to do this for a friend,that's for sure.

Aww the kiss scene was sweet (Lady and the tramp yo!)...Jessica tho.

"Picture Ye Jin. Or Tiffany. Or Mila Kunis."

Ooh Jessica's crush on Tiffany. Good times.

(Anonymous) on September 2nd, 2013 08:58 pm (UTC)
Here we go,show time kids.

“Jessica,” Seohyun hummed, lightly massaging her shoulder. “We’re here.”
She is lightly massaging your shoulder,that is cute. *pervert smile*
“You passed out the second I buckled you in. I let you sleep fifteen more minutes once we got here."
She buckled you in and she let you sleep 15 more minutes. It's very cute. *pervert smile*
“Taeyeon’s wandering around the lot like a creeper. Do you need help guiding her back to your apartment?”
“No...I...I got it. You came by the bar just to pick me up?”
Damn it.
“Yes. Convinced Mother that Jiyeon was having emergency boyfriend troubles.”
She just came to pick you up at a random bar and she lied to my her mother. That is very very cute.*pervert smile*
jessica shook her heavy head and fumbled for her purse. “S-sawry I didn’t answer your texts.”
Ah that's the answer to my question. She read them,but she didn't answered. Oookk!
“I don’t mind.”
She doesn't mind.It's cute *pervert smile*
That Seohyun. Picks me up from a random bar just to take me home a few streets over. Going out of her way just to help me. And Taeyeon, too. I guess.
That is what i said before.It's so cute.*pervert smile*
“You’re sweet.”
Yes,she is. Sooo cute.*pervert smile*

"Out of appreciation or neediness--it wasn’t clear--she leaned over to plant a lingering kiss to her lips. Seohyun smiled against her face, returning the favor. The skin of her cheek felt downy soft and her breath had a hint of mint. Jessica contemplated going further, but reminded her foggy mind that another night with Seohyun was NOT okay."
Errors,i fixed them for ya. *smile*

Oh god,cry cry Taeyeon. Tiffany didn't break with you...it's too much all of a sudden and would be for a futile reason too! You didn't understand a shit Tae! And be careful 'cause she's a thief.

Jessica felt a pressure in the back of her throat. No, I can’t cry. Or we’ll just be two sappy ass drunks making a scene. “We’re alone. Again. Maybe w-we shouldn’t wait until we’re thirty.”

Yeah Jessica...MEANING??

“We should be making out.”

"Ugh, I hate the smell of beer breath. “Then, watch your tongue. You kiss like a cow.”
“I kish like your mother?”


Jessica palmed at her waist, bringing their lips back together. I need to shut her up. Yet, she found herself speaking once she got a good grip. “Oh, gawwwd. Can you do some crunches or whatever? You’re sooo squishy.”
“Tiffany likes it.”
“Don’t talk about other girls while we’re making out.”

ROFL They are surely enjoying the kiss...

The kisses didn’t lighten up. With that ale-flavored tongue wedged so far into her mouth, the only method of air consumption came in sharp gasps. Taking the irregular sounds as moaning, Taeyeon did some absurd puppy-like mewl with excitement.
“Mmmm. Jeshka. Let’s connuhhh--consuhmah....”
Oh, god.
“Cahhhnsummuuuh....consummate this marriage.”

On the street Tae? I have the impression that Jessica is like "Eeww Eww". She is like "I'm gonna throw up in a moment" LOL

(Anonymous) on September 2nd, 2013 09:24 pm (UTC)
"in a split second, she found herself hunched between their legs, vomiting up all the drinks. Tears ran freely down her cheeks, mingling into smudged mascara as she hurled harder, wishing she would've had at least one croissant as solid food."
EWWW EEEW EWWW EWWW ...OH it's really happening. EWW EWW WEE EWEWE EWEW (I bet that she's gorgeous even when she's pucking LOL)

“Are there noodles in your vom? That’d make it wayyy more official.”

“D-doesn’t ‘I need my space’ mean she broke up wif me?”
Christofer,i knew it *FACEPALM*

“I.....” Taeyeon lurched to the grass behind them, taking her turn to throw up.
Eww what is it today? The festival of vomite!?

I don't have this disgusted face since that time i saw a woman giving birth in a program. Well kinda...

I cheated on Tiffany. Holy haaaleeee. I...I....” She continued to hurl.
Drunk kiss + vomite = cheating? Oh that's not cheating,just shut up about it and go on. Unless something happened meanwhile everybody were at Yoona's??

Let's see:

Yoona,Jessica,Sooyoung,Yuri,Hyoyeon,Tiffany were at Yoona's home.
Seo was at her home.
The only one missing is...Sunny. Sunyeon!?
I don't think this is the case,but with you everything is possible.

“Pleeeease come back, Seohyun. I need you.”

Yeah it's happening...but wait a moment.
We are reaching the end (cry cry) and from now on there will be one chapter x character.
I'm scared for Seosic. It's definitely Seosic vs Yoonsic now. I guess that the next update will play an important role.
I don't know if celebrate Seo next update or be scared,because it's too early to be something good. I don't know if it's clear what i'm saying,i'm probably babbling...
There will be tomorrow the next update? You're always so constant and punctual.
I appreciate this very much.
Many thanks.

What an EWWW of update btw. Nice in a EWWW way. AHAHA!
That Seosica's kiss tho *HYPER*!
Aren't they beautiful together?? *totoro smile*

Love ya so much it hurts. Give me a biscuit.

Bye Bye <3

P.S Sorry for eventual errors and company,i didn't check them. :( (This counts for every comment -_-)
P.S2 You let them kiss and throw up,i mean seriously...you're amazingly EWWW! You actually had the courage to do it...LOL
P.S3 God,look how today i wrote 3 encyclopedias and a half O.o Well,you have something to read for the next 2 years :D
P.S4 LJ gave me a lot of problems...

checkinyourbra: jessica01checkinyourbra on September 3rd, 2013 04:59 am (UTC)
I can't wait to reply to all this.


WOW!!! Longest comment from you ever, I believe. Let's get to it!! *stretches*

LOL you started sobbing already at the beginning of the chapter!?!? Ahhhh. XDDD HAHAHA So, I read several ewws and an awk laugh. DON'T YOU LOVE GROSS!TAEYEON!?

"'She has like eight kids now'
Dear lady,you don't have a job,a hobbie or something else to do instead of "boogie woogie" with your partner?"---HAHAHAH Where were you when the green-carded cousin needed you most?!!?

Hmmmm...your conclusions look good to me. Very sound observations. I love seeing how others interpret character interactions.

#poorTaeyeon indeed. C'mon, Jessica!! "Ooh Jessica's crush on Tiffany. Good times.
"---heheehe. yep.

HAAHHAHAHA ALL THE PERVERTED SMILING DURING THE SEOSIC CAR SCENE. GURL WHYYYYY YOU'RE KILLING ME. And then you top it off with calling Seohyun's mama YOUR mum again. hahahahahaha

"It's so cute.*pervert smile*"--OMG GURL. You've brought creeperness to a whole new level with these comments. (And I love it.) Really wishing that I heard the inhuman sound you made when they smooched.

Just when I recover...I see your comment about Tiffany being a thief. BACK TO DYING OF LAUGHTER.

That kiss was a hot mess, right?! XDDD I would like to assume that Taeyeon meant "consummate the marriage" in the apartment, but that's a HUGE assumption. She prolly wanted to do it out in the open.


I guess Taeyeon considers the drunken kiss cheating. Esp. when the kiss is with the backup girlfriend that had jealous Tiffany upset in the first place. XD

Shipper speculation...I'm in my bunker rn. Scared.

YAAAAYYY to EWWW chapters!! They're fun to write! :D

Come over and I'll feed you the biscuit, bb.

"P.S2 You let them kiss and throw up,i mean seriously...you're amazingly EWWW! You actually had the courage to do it...LOL"--YES I DID. FANDOM HISTORY WAS MADE. LOL.

I loveddd the encyclopedias, bb. No worries. ^^

Until next time~~

Edited at 2013-09-06 06:33 am (UTC)
8moons2stars8moons2stars on June 19th, 2017 08:42 am (UTC)

But also....*insert the grumpiest grumpy cat picture EVER* that was me during the entire makeout. NO. Thank God it wasn't a good one. I would've cried.
checkinyourbra: Seotae01checkinyourbra on July 11th, 2017 07:26 am (UTC)

"*insert the grumpiest grumpy cat picture EVER* that was me during the entire makeout"-- HAHAHHAHAHHA. Ohhhhhhhh you're not into those kinds of makeouts in fic?!?! DON'T LIE. YOU LOW-KEY LOVED IT.

Lollll I see your fear of TaengSic here. Heh.
8moons2stars8moons2stars on July 11th, 2017 12:13 pm (UTC)
Grumpiest cat because me no like TaengSic :((((((((((((((((((((((((
Huhuhuhu my heart rejects it. Like an unwanted organ donor. HAHAHAHAHA WHAT OK